=15. RESPONDET= introduces the agricultural image of 18 'sed siccum
sterili uomere litus aro', for the word here means 'yield'. _OLD_
_respondeo_ 8c cites for the literal sense Virgil _G_ II 63-64 'truncis
oleae melius, propagine uites / respondent', Columella II 1 3 'humus ...
magno faenore ... colono respondet', Col III 3 4; for a transferred use
see Sen _Ep_ LXXXI 1 'non respondeant [_sc_ beneficia] potius quam non
dentur'.
=16. SICCVM ... LITVS ARO.= Proverbial for a useless activity. See Otto
_harena_ 4 and compare _Tr_ V iv 47-48 'plena tot ac tantis referetur
gratia factis, / nec sinet ille [Ovid] litus arare boues'.
_Sterili_ is transferred by hypallage from _litus_; _siccum_ serves no
purpose beyond providing a balancing epithet.
=17. VENAS EXCAECAT=, the reading of most codices, is obviously correct as
against the VENAS CVM CAECAT of _BCHL_. Ovid uses _excaecare_ again at
_Met_ XV 270-72 'hic fontes natura nouos emisit, at illic / clausit
... flumina prosiliunt aut _excaecata_ [_uar_ exsiccata] residunt'.
=17. IN VNDIS= is probably corrupt; if it is retained, from the context it
must mean 'in the water of springs' (Professor A. Dalzell). Williams
suggests 'in the case of water', marking the analogy with _pectora sic
mea sunt limo uitiata malorum_ in 19.
For _undis_ as a corrupt hexameter ending, compare _Met_ XV 276
'redditur Argolicis ingens Erasinus in aruis [_codd_: in undis _Sen_ NQ
_III 26 4_]', _Met_ VIII 162 'liquidus Phrygiis Maeandros in aruis
[_uar_ liquidis Phrygius ... in undis]', and _Met_ XIV 155 'sedibus
Euboicam Stygiis emergit in urbem [_uar_ sedibus euboicis stigiis
emersus ab undis]'.
The line seems to have passed without comment until Merkel's second
edition: '_in undis_ minus bene positum uidetur; temptabam _hiulcas,_
quod expressisset Statius Theb. VIIII 450 _hiulcis flumina uenis
Suggerit_ ['he (the river Asopos) opens his springs wide and adds his
streams']'. There seems no obvious reason, however, for Ovid to define
the springs as 'gaping'.
Madvig conjectured INVNDANS, the corruption of which would be easy; but
_uenas_ seems more in need of a modifier than _limus_--Professor R. J.
Tarrant suggests APERTAS or AQVARVM, Professor A. Dalzell IN ARVIS.
Professor Tarrant also suggests to me that _in undis_ could well have
originated as a gloss on _uenas_.
=18. LAESAQVE.= There seems no reason to replace this with Merkel's
LAPSAQVE ('flowing back'?), which even seems to contradict the sense of
_resistit_.
The same sense of _laesus_ at _Am_ III vii 32 'deficiunt laesi carmine
['spell'] fontis aquae'.
=20. VENA PAVPERIORE.= The same image of Ovid's poetic talent at _Tr_ III
xiv 33-34 'ingenium fregere meum mala, cuius et ante / fons infecundus
_paruaque uena_ fuit' and _EP_ II v 21-22 'ingenioque meo, _uena_ quod
_paupere_ manat, / plaudis, et e riuo flumina magna facis'.
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