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[118] The _Godfrey of Bulloigne_ of Fairfax has been praised well
beyond the full extent of its merits. The sober fact concerning it is
that though the language has a real interest, the translation has not
the merit of great accuracy, and it is wanting in those flashes of
original power with which Fairfax’s contemporaries seldom failed to
redeem their infidelity to their author. He, on the contrary, is too
often far below Tasso, and he is addicted to the detestable practice of
replacing the simplicity of the Italian by classic commonplaces. Now
and then he is inept, or shirks a difficulty which he ought to have
faced. Examples of all three vices may be found in the beginning of the
fifteenth canto. Tasso opens with the simple and direct words--
“Già richiamava il bel nascente raggio
All’ opere ogni animal che ’n terra alberga.”
For this Fairfax writes--
“The rosy-fingered morn with gladsome ray
Rose to her task from old Tithonus’ lap”--
the commonplace of a boy doing a copy of Latin verse. In the second
stanza, where the Italian has--
“Erano essi già sorti, e l’arme intorno
Alle robuste membra avean già messe”--
Fairfax renders--
“They started up, and every tender limb
In sturdy steel and stubborn plate they dight.”
The _tender_ limbs of two hardened old soldiers is surely weak.
At the end of the next stanza, we have in the Italian--
“E in poppa quella
Che guidar gli dovea, fatal donzella.”
The word “fatal,” an appropriate epithet for Fortune, who sits in
the stern to steer the boat, disappears in Fairfax, and we get the
colourless line--
“Wherein a damsel sate the stern to guide.”
And these are not exceptions. Fairfax constantly gives the inapplicable
adjective, or the vague general term, where Tasso is faultless in his
precision.
[119] _Life of Giordano Bruno_, by Mr L. Frith: London, 1897. _Opere de
Giordano Bruno_, ed. Wagner: Leipzig, 1830.
[120] This controversy has its place in every life of Tasso, and is
told at length by Serassi, _Vita de Tasso_: Bergamo, 1790. My own
trifling acquaintance with it has given me the impression that it can
be profitable to no mortal, except perhaps a historian of criticism.
[121] _Il Pastor Fido._ Verona, 1735.
CHAPTER XIII. CONCLUSION.
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