This is selected as a specimen of Mackay's descriptive poetry. It
is in a style peculiar to the Highlands, where description runs so
entirely into epithets and adjectives, as to render recitation
breathless, and translation hopeless. Here, while we have retained
the imagery, we have been unable to find room, or rather rhyme, for
one half of the epithets in the original. The power of alliterative
harmony in the original song is extraordinary.
I.
At waking so early
Was snow on the Ben,
And, the glen of the hill in,
The storm-drift so chilling
The linnet was stilling,
That couch'd in its den;
And poor robin was shrilling
In sorrow his strain.
II.
Every grove was expecting
Its leaf shed in gloom;
The sap it is draining,
Down rootwards 'tis straining,
And the bark it is waning
As dry as the tomb,
And the blackbird at morning
Is shrieking his doom.
III.
Ceases thriving, the knotted,
The stunted birk-shaw;[90]
While the rough wind is blowing,
And the drift of the snowing
Is shaking, o'erthrowing,
The copse on the law.
IV.
'Tis the season when nature
Is all in the sere,
When her snow-showers are hailing,
Her rain-sleet assailing,
Her mountain winds wailing,
Her rime-frosts severe.
V.
'Tis the season of leanness,
Unkindness, and chill;
Its whistle is ringing,
An iciness bringing,
Where the brown leaves are clinging
In helplessness, still,
And the snow-rush is delving
With furrows the hill.
VI.
The sun is in hiding,
Or frozen its beam
On the peaks where he lingers,
On the glens, where the singers,[91]
With their bills and small fingers
Are raking the stream,
Or picking the midstead
For forage--and scream.
VII.
When darkens the gloaming
Oh, scant is their cheer!
All benumb'd is their song in
The hedge they are thronging,
And for shelter still longing,
The mortar[92] they tear;
Ever noisily, noisily
Squealing their care.
VIII.
The running stream's chieftain[93]
Is trailing to land,
So flabby, so grimy,
So sickly, so slimy,--
The spots of his prime he
Has rusted with sand;
Crook-snouted his crest is
That taper'd so grand.
IX.
How mournful in winter
The lowing of kine;
How lean-back'd they shiver,
How draggled their cover,
How their nostrils run over
With drippings of brine,
So scraggy and crining
In the cold frost they pine.
X.
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