Mary, Queen of Scots, 1542-1587; Queens -- Scotland -- Biography; Scotland -- History -- Mary Stuart, 1542-1567
The most curious point connected with the translations is Crawford’s
deposition. It was handed in on December 9, 1568. Whoever did it out of
Crawford’s Scots into English had obviously both the Scots and English
versions of Letter II. before him. Where the deposition is practically
identical with the corresponding passages of Letter II., the transcriber
of it into English usually followed the Scots version of Letter II. But
there is a corrected draft in the Lennox MSS. at Cambridge, which proves
that the Angliciser of Crawford’s Scots occasionally altered it into
harmony with the English version of Letter II. Thus, in the first
paragraph, the original draft of Crawford in English has, like the Scots
version of Letter II., ‘the _rude_ words that I had spoken to Cunningham.’
But, in the official copy, in English, of Crawford, and in the Lennox
draft of it, ‘rude’ is changed into ‘_sharpe_ wordes,’ and so on. The part
of Crawford which corresponds with Letter II. is free from obvious literal
renderings of the French idiom, as Mr. Henderson remarks.[426] These
abound in the English version of the corresponding part of Letter II.,
but are absent here in the Scots translation. It is, therefore, open to
argument that Crawford did make notes of Darnley’s and Mary’s talk; that
these were done into ‘the original French,’ and thence retranslated into
the Scots (free from French idiom here) and into the English, where traces
of French idiom in this passage are frequent.
THE CASKET LETTERS
I print the Scots Texts with one or two variations from C (the Cambridge
MS.) and Y (the Yelverton MS.). The English Texts are given, where they
are not merely taken direct from the Scots translations; these and
Crawford’s Deposition are from MSS. in the Record Office and Hatfield
Calendar.
LETTER I
PUBLISHED SCOTS TRANSLATION
It apeiris, that with zour absence thair is alswa joynit forgetfulnes,
seand yat at zour departing ze promysit to mak me advertisement of
zour newis from tyme to tyme. The waitting upon yame zesterday causit
me to be almaist in sic joy as I will be at zour returning, quhilk ze
have delayit langer than zour promeis was.
As to me, howbeit I have na farther newis from zow, according to my
commissioun, I bring the Man with me to Craigmillar upon Monounday
quhair he will be all Wednisday; and I will gang to Edinburgh to draw
blude of me, gif in the meane tyme I get na newis in ye contrarie fra
zow.
He is mair gay than ever ze saw him; he puttis me in remembrance of
all thingis yat may mak me beleve he luifis me. Summa, ze will say yat
he makis lufe to me: of ye quhilk I tak sa greit plesure, yat I enter
never where he is, bot incontinent I tak ye seiknes of my sair syde, I
am sa troubillit with it. Gif Paris bringis me that quhilk I send him
for, I traist it sall amend me.
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