Butler, Samuel, 1835-1902 -- Notebooks, sketchbooks, etc.
My notes always grow longer if I shorten them. I mean the process of
compression makes them more pregnant and they breed new notes. I never
try to lengthen them, so I do not know whether they would grow shorter if
I did. Perhaps that might be a good way of getting them shorter.
Shortening
A young author is tempted to leave anything he has written through fear
of not having enough to say if he goes cutting out too freely. But it is
easier to be long than short. I have always found compressing, cutting
out, and tersifying a passage suggests more than anything else does.
Things pruned off in this way are like the heads of the hydra, two grow
for every two that is lopped off.
Omission
If a writer will go on the principle of stopping everywhere and anywhere
to put down his notes, as the true painter will stop anywhere and
everywhere to sketch, he will be able to cut down his works liberally.
He will become prodigal not of writing—any fool can be this—but of
omission. You become brief because you have more things to say than time
to say them in. One of the chief arts is that of knowing what to neglect
and the more talk increases the more necessary does this art become.
Brevity
Handel’s jig in the ninth _Suite de Pieces_, in G minor, is very fine but
it is perhaps a little long. Probably Handel was in a hurry, for it
takes much more time to get a thing short than to leave it a little long.
Brevity is not only the soul of wit, but the soul of making oneself
agreeable and of getting on with people, and, indeed, of everything that
makes life worth living. So precious a thing, however, cannot be got
without more expense and trouble than most of us have the moral wealth to
lay out.
Diffuseness
This sometimes helps, as, for instance, when the subject is hard; words
that may be, strictly speaking, unnecessary still may make things easier
for the reader by giving him more time to master the thought while his
eye is running over the verbiage. So, a little water may prevent a
strong drink from burning throat and stomach. A style that is too terse
is as fatiguing as one that is too diffuse. But when a passage is
written a little long, with consciousness and compunction but still
deliberately, as what will probably be most easy for the reader, it can
hardly be called diffuse.
Difficulties in Art, Literature and Music
The difficult and the unintelligible are only conceivable at all in
virtue of their catching on to something less difficult and less
unintelligible and, through this, to things easily done and understood.
It is at these joints in their armour that difficulties should be
attacked.
Never tackle a serious difficulty as long as something which must be
done, and about which you see your way fairly well, remains undone; the
settling of this is sure to throw light upon the way in which the serious
difficulty is to be resolved. It is doing the What-you-can that will
best help you to do the What-you-cannot.
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