Horace -- Translations into English; Laudatory poetry, Latin -- Translations into English
"The unplumb'd, salt, estranging sea."
MATTHEW ARNOLD.
And slow Fate quicken'd Death's once halting pace.
The commentators seem generally to connect Necessitas with Leti; I have
preferred to separate them. Necessitas occurs elsewhere in Horace (Book
I, Ode 35, v. 17; Book III, Ode 1, v. 14; Ode 24, v. 6) as an
independent personage, nearly synonymous with Fate, and I do not see
why she should not be represented as accelerating the approach of
Death.
BOOK I, ODE 5.
I have ventured to model my version of this Ode, to some extent, on
Milton's, "the high-water mark," as it has been termed, "which Horatian
translation has attained." I have not, however, sought to imitate his
language, feeling that the attempt would be presumptuous in itself, and
likely to create a sense of incongruity with the style of the other
Odes.
BOOK I, ODE 6.
Who with pared nails encounter youths in fight.
I like Ritter's interpretation of sectis, cut sharp, better than the
common one, which supposes the paring of the nails to denote that the
attack is not really formidable. Sectis will then be virtually
equivalent to Bentley's strictis. Perhaps my translation is not
explicit enough.
BOOK I, ODE 7.
And search for wreaths the olive's rifled bower.
Undique decerptam I take, with Bentley, to mean "plucked
on all hands," i. e. exhausted as a topic of poetical treatment.
He well compares Lucretius, Book I, v. 927--
"Juvatque novas decerpere flores,
Insignemque meo capiti petere inde coronam
Unde prius nulli velarint tempora Musae."
'Tis Teucer leads, 'tis Teucer breathes the wind.
If I have slurred over the Latin, my excuse must be that the precise
meaning of the Latin is difficult to catch. Is Teucer called auspex, as
taking the auspices, like an augur, or as giving the auspices, like a
god? There are objections to both interpretations; a Roman imperator
was not called auspex, though he was attended by an auspex, and was
said to have the auspicia; auspex is frequently used of one who, as we
should say, inaugurates an undertaking, but only if he is a god or a
deified mortal. Perhaps Horace himself oscillated between the two
meanings; his later commentators do not appear to have distinguished
them.
BOOK I, ODE 9.
Since this Ode was printed off, I find that my last stanza bears a
suspicious likeness to the version by "C. S. C." I cannot say whether
it is a case of mere coincidence, or of unconscious recollection; it
certainly is not one of deliberate appropriation. I have only had the
opportunity of seeing his book at distant intervals; and now, on
finally comparing his translations with my own, I find that, while
there are a few resemblances, there are several marked instances of
dissimilarity, where, though we have adopted the same metre, we do not
approach each other in the least.
BOOK I, ODE 15.
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