Horace -- Translations into English; Laudatory poetry, Latin -- Translations into English
I had originally reversed amicos and propinquos, supposing it to be
indifferent which of them was used in either stanza. But a friend has
pointed out to me that a distinction is probably intended between the
friends who attended Regulus and the kinsmen who sought to prevent his
going.
BOOK III, ODE 8.
Lay down that load of state-concern.
I have translated generally; but Horace's meaning is special, referring
to Maecenas' office of prefect of the city.
BOOK III, ODE 9.
Buttmann complains of the editors for specifying the interlocutors as
Horace and Lydia, which he thinks as incongruous as if in an English
amoebean ode Collins were to appear side by side with Phyllis. The
remark may be just as affects the Latin, though Ode 19 of the present
Book, and Odes 33 and 36 of Book I, might be adduced to show that
Horace does not object to mixing Latin and Greek names in the same
poem; but it does not apply to a translation, where to the English
reader's apprehension Horace and Lydia will seem equally real, equally
fanciful.
BOOK III, ODE 17.
Lamia was doubtless vain of his pedigree; Horace accordingly banters
him good-humouredly by spending two stanzas out of four in giving him
his proper ancestral designation. To shorten the address by leaving out
a stanza, as some critics and some translators have done, is simply to
rob Horace's trifle of its point.
BOOK III, ODE 23.
There is something harsh in the expression of the fourth stanza of this
Ode in the Latin. Tentare cannot stand without an object, and to
connect it, as the commentators do, with deos is awkward. I was going
to remark that possibly some future Bentley would conjecture certare,
or litare, when I found that certare had been anticipated by Peerlkamp,
who, if not a Bentley, was a Bentleian. But it would not be easy to
account for the corruption, as the fact that the previous line begins
with cervice would rather have led to the change of tentare into
certare than vice versa.
BOOK III, ODE 24.
Let Necessity but drive
Her wedge of adamant into that proud head.
I have translated this difficult passage nearly as it stands, not
professing to decide whether tops of buildings or human heads are
meant. Either is strange till explained; neither seems at present to be
supported by any exact parallel in ancient literature or ancient art.
Necessity with her nails has met us before in Ode 35 of Book I, and
Orelli describes an Etruscan work of art where she is represented with
that cognizance; but though the nail is an appropriate emblem of
fixity, we are apparently not told where it is to be driven. The
difficulty here is further complicated by the following metaphor of the
noose, which seems to be a new and inconsistent image.
BOOK III, ODE 29.
Nor gaze on Tibur, never dried.
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