Actors -- Fiction; England -- Fiction; Theater -- Fiction
“You took me too literally, Mr. Lennard. No self-respecting member of
the Church would turn his wife out of doors in the middle of the night.
He would wrestle with her mentally. There is a fine chance in that scene
for inspired rhetoric. Think! Something that starts gently and
gradually, crescendoes as the wealth of this theme reveals itself. Why,
it comes to my brain as easily as if the trouble were my own.” He began
to pace up and down, saying, “God gave you into my keeping, and I shall
not let you go. For the sake of that great love that once was ours—love
consecrated by holy matrimony, cemented by the hands of little
children—put behind you these dark thoughts, my dear, these sinful,
useless hopes. Shun this evil phantom that rises like
a—a—something—in our path. Bear your part in the great trust—the
trust of a wife and a mother.” He paused dramatically.
“That’s the stuff,” chipped in Freddie Manning. “And the girl finishes
up by crying in his arms, and the house shouts itself sick.”
“According to my way of thinking,” hazarded Mr. Lennard politely, “no
woman would stop in the room if her husband talked like that.”
“Well, there you are,” said Manning. “That’s a jolly good way of getting
her off—much better than pitching her through the window.”
“Let us approach the matter rationally,” suggested Eliphalet, although
he was not a little distressed at the reception given to his oratory.
“Having gone so far, I am not anxious to relinquish the play. Even if
only on account of the title, I confess I am drawn towards it. I
suggest, Mr. Lennard, that you leave the manuscript with me to work
upon. It would save much fruitless discussion. I should bring to bear a
fresh eye, cultivated to observe and remedy the existing faults. What do
you say?”
“Just as you please,” said the young man hopelessly. “I don’t suppose I
should ever get what you want.”
During the fortnight in which Eliphalet laboured at “A Man’s Way” he had
constant resource to manuscripts of old plays in his repertory, most
particularly to one called “The Vespers,” in which a clergyman and his
wife passed through troubled waters. In this work Right throve
persistently, mainly through the good offices of much Homeric matter
delivered from the centre of the stage and etherealised by the
influences of the Spot Lime or Red Glow from Fire.
Eliphalet was not an author, and he began to work tentatively. But after
a while he found that to give any real tone value to the scenes and
characters it was necessary to carry out very extensive alterations. It
is possible to keep gold-fish in an aviary. In certain elements only a
certain class of life can exist. Influences in one breath to say “Chuck
it and clear out” in the next. Wherefore, for every line Eliphalet
altered there arose an immediate obligation to alter a hundred
succeeding lines. And this duty, with the aid of his reference library,
i.e., the Repertory Plays, he most conscientiously performed.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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