The Poems of Philip Freneau, Poet of the American Revolution. Volume 1 (of 3)Freneau, Philip Morin
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The Poems of Philip Freneau, Poet of the American Revolution. Volume 1 (of 3)
Freneau, Philip Morin
American poetry
The 1786 edition, which was evolved with such great changes from the
original version, furnished the text of the 1795 edition. There were
some twenty variations and three added lines, viz., lines 354, 427, 438.
Line 265 was changed from "Which full enjoyment only finds for fools,"
to its final form; line 352 was changed from "A thousand kingdoms
rais'd;" line 360, from "Our Alexanders, Pompeys, heroes, kings;" line
371, from "One monarchy;" and 461, from "Death's ancient." The other
changes were largely verbal, nearly all being for the better. For the
edition of 1809, Freneau used the 1795 text, with some twenty-one
variations and one added line, viz., line 67. These variations, which
nearly all concern single words, are generally not at all for the
better: for instance, "Shackle," in line 343, is changed to "people;"
"our sons," in line 365, is changed to "a race;" "were born," in 367, to
"we exist;" and "strumpets," in 409, to "vagrants." Freneau's notes in
the various editions were as follows:
62. Genesis x, 25.
100. Hor. Epod. 16.
207. 1755.
251. Hom. Odyss. B. 24.
328. Newton.
373. The Massacre at Boston. March 5th, 1770, is here more
particularly glanced at.
ON RETIREMENT[46]
(By Hezekiah Salem)
A hermit's house beside a stream,
With forests planted round,
Whatever it to you may seem
More real happiness I deem
Than if I were a monarch crown'd.
A cottage I could call my own,
Remote from domes of care;
A little garden walled with stone,
The wall with ivy overgrown,
A limpid fountain near,
Would more substantial joys afford,
More real bliss impart
Than all the wealth that misers hoard,
Than vanquish'd worlds, or worlds restored--
Mere cankers of the heart!
Vain, foolish man! how vast thy pride,
How little can your wants supply!--
'Tis surely wrong to grasp so wide--
You act as if you only had
To vanquish--not to die!
[46] The title in the edition of 1786 was "Retirement." In 1795 it was
changed to "The Wish of Diogenes."
DISCOVERY[47]
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