"I made as much as I honestly could of it. I knew you didn't like
padding or faking, and I don't myself."
Ricker was still holding the two manuscripts up before him. He now
handed them over his shoulder to Maxwell, where he stood beside him. "Do
you think you could weld these two things together?"
"I don't know."
"Suppose you try."
"As editorial, or--"
"Either. I'll decide after you're done. Do it here."
He pushed some papers off the long table beside him, and Maxwell sat
down to his task. It was not difficult. The material was really of
kindred character throughout. He had merely to write a few prefatory
sentences, in the editorial attitude, to his report, and then append the
editorial, with certain changes, again. It did not take him long; in
half an hour he handed the result to Ricker.
"Yes," said Ricker, and he began to read it anew, with his blue pencil
in his hand.
Maxwell had come with nerves steeled to bear the rejection of his
article entire, but he was not prepared to suffer the erasure of all his
pet phrases and favorite sentences, sometimes running to entire
paragraphs.
When Ricker handed it back to him at last with "What do you think of it
now?" Maxwell had the boldness to answer, "Well, Mr. Ricker, if I _must_
say, I think you've taken all the bones and blood out of it."
Ricker laughed. "Oh, no! Merely the fangs and poison-sacks. Look here,
young man! Did you believe all those cynical things when you were saying
them?"
"I don't know--"
"_I_ know. I know you _didn't_. Every one of them rang false. They were
there for literary effect, and for the pleasure of the groundlings. But
by and by, if you keep on saying those things, you'll get to thinking
them, and what a man thinks a man is. There are things there that you
ought to be ashamed of, if you really thought them, but I know you
didn't, so I made free to strike them all out." Maxwell looked foolish;
he wished to assert himself, but he did not know how. Ricker went on:
"Those charming little sarcasms and innuendoes of yours would have
killed your article for really intelligent readers. They would have
suspected a young fellow having his fling, or an old fool speaking out
of the emptiness of his heart. As it is, we have got something unique,
and I don't mind telling you I'm very glad to have it. I've never made
any secret of my belief that you have talent."
"You've been very good," said Maxwell, a little rueful still. The
surgeon's knife hurts though it cures.
When Maxwell went home, he met his mother. "Why, mother," said the
young fellow, "old Ricker is going to print my report as editorial; and
we're not going to have any report."
"I told you it was good!"
Maxwell felt it was due to himself to keep some grudge, and he said,
"Yes; but he's taken all the life out of it with his confounded blue
pencil. It's perfectly dead."
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