While they were crossing the foyer, he said: "That enlargement came out
fine; you must run up to my office, while it's there to-morrow, to see it.
And that was a great write-up you gave Lucky Banks. It was yours, wasn't
it? Thought so. Bought a hundred copies. Mrs. Feversham is going to take
'em east to distribute in Washington. Double blue-pencilled one,
'specially for the President."
Jimmie smiled, blushing. "That's more than I deserve, but I'm afraid, even
if it reaches his hands, he won't take the time to read it."
"You leave that to Mrs. Feversham," replied Morganstein. "Saw that little
scoop, too, about Tisdale. He's the closest oyster on record."
"The trouble was," said Jimmie wisely, "he started that Indian story and
nobody thought to interrupt with more coal questions."
"You mean he told that yarn purposely to head us off?"
"That's the way it seemed to me afterwards. He spun it out, you know; it
lasted to Bremerton, where I got off. But it was interesting; the best I
ever heard, and I took it all down, word for word. It was little use,
though. The chief gave one look at my bunch of copy and warned me, for the
last time, the paper wasn't publishing any novels. What I had gone aboard
the _Aquila_ for was to write up her equipment and, incidentally, to pick
up Hollis Tisdale's views on Alaska coal."
They had reached the entrance to the Morganstein box; the orchestra was
playing again, the curtain began to rise on the second act, and Daniels
hurried back to his place. But during the next intermission, an usher
brought the young reporter a note. It was written concisely on a business
card, but Jimmie read it through slowly a second time before he handed it
to the Society Editor.
"Mrs. Feversham wants to see that story," so it ran. "Leave it at my
office in the morning. She may take it east with her. Knows some magazine
people who are going to feature Alaska and the Northwest."
After a thoughtful moment Miss Atkins returned the card to Jimmie. "Is it
the Indian story?" she asked.
Daniels nodded, watching her face. His smouldering excitement was ready to
flame. "They will read it for Mrs. Feversham,"--Geraldine's voice trembled
slightly--"and they will take it. It's a magazine story. They ought to pay
you handsomely. It's the best thing you ever wrote."
Marcia Feversham saw possibilities in that story. Indeed, writing Jimmie
from Washington, she called it a little masterpiece. There was no doubt it
would be accepted somewhere, though he must expect to see it cut down
considerably, it was so long. Then, presumably to facilitate the placing
of the manuscript, she herself went over it with exceeding care, revising
with her pencil, eliminating whole paragraphs, and finally fixing the end
short of several pages. In the copy which her husband's stenographer
prepared, the original was reduced fully a third. After that it mellowed
for an interval in Marcia's drawer.
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