And so they went upstairs and opened up the aloof room, with its
persistent and insular odor of the Sabbath and antimacassars, and drew
up chairs to the window. The row of houses opposite, which had been
converted into shops, was bathed in the afternoon sun. A florist’s
windows alight with flowers looked like a line from Tennyson in the
middle of a financial article in a newspaper. Traffic roared in the
street below but did not quite succeed in drowning a weather-beaten
piano accompanying a throaty baritone singing, “She dwelt amid the
untrodden wiys.—And h’oh the differ-rence ter me.”
With a thoughtfulness that seemed to Ernest Treadwell to be exquisite,
Lola shut the window so that she might not miss a single word that she
was about to hear. Without any preliminaries and with the colossal
egotism that is part and parcel of all writing, the young librarian took
from his pocket a wad of manuscript, and in a deadly monotone commenced
to read his epic. It was in blank verse and ran to about sixteen pages.
It retold the old story of Paola and Francesca, not in the manner of
Stephen Phillips and not in imitation of Masefield or any of the younger
poets, but in the Treadwell way,—jerky, explosive and here and there out
of key; but for all that filled with a rough picturesqueness and
passion, with a quite extraordinary sense of color and feeling which
held Lola breathless from beginning to end. It was this boy’s greatest
effort, on which he had been working for innumerable months, burning the
midnight oil with the influence of Lola upon him, and his great love
which lifted him into ecstasy.—And when he had finished and ventured to
look into her face, he saw there something that crowned his head with
laurels and filled his heart with tears.
“Oh,” she said. “Oh.—Ernie, you’ve done it. It’s beautiful. You are a
poet. However far behind them all, you are in the line of great
singers.” And she reached out for the manuscript and saw that on the
first page, in angular boyish writing, were the words, “To Lola,—of whom
I dream.”
Simpkins, Treadwell, Chalfont,—but, oh, where was Fallaray, her hero,
the man who needed love?
IV
When Feo bounced into her room a little after five-thirty she found a
perfectly composed and efficient Lola who had laid out a selection of
her mistress’s most recent frocks with the accompanying shoes and
stockings. There was nothing about the girl to indicate her latent
excitement and her determination under any circumstances to keep her
appointment at the Carlton. The cardboard box from Mrs. Rumbold’s was up
in her room. Ellen had been interviewed and had promised to slip down
and open the area door at twelve o’clock.
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