The Serapion Brethren, Vol. I.Hoffmann, E. T. A. (Ernst Theodor Amadeus)
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The Serapion Brethren, Vol. I.
Hoffmann, E. T. A. (Ernst Theodor Amadeus)
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The friends gave diverse verdicts as to Cyprian's tale, Theodore
disapproved of it altogether, and said Cyprian had utterly marred for
him the beautiful picture, which Novalis had drawn of the grandly
inspired Heinrich of Ofterdingen. But his chief objection was that the
singers never actually got the length of any singing, for sheer
continual preparation to sing. Ottmar supported him; but, at the same
time, considered that the introductory vision might be admitted to be
Serapiontic; although, at the same time, Cyprian ought to be careful
for the future not to dip into Ancient Chronicles, because reading of
that sort was apt--as the present instance proved--to lead him into an
unfamiliar province, in which--not being native to the soil, nor
endowed with a strong bump of locality--he wandered astray and lost
himself, without being able to find the real path.
Cyprian, putting on a face of vexation, jumped hastily up, went to the
fire, and was going to throw his manuscript into it. But Lothair went
up to him, seized him by the shoulders, turned him about, and said with
solemnity:
"Cyprian, Cyprian! withstand strenuously the foul fiend of author's
pride, which, is vexing you, and whispering all manner of ugly things
in your ear. I will address you in the formula of conjuration employed
by the doughty Tobias von Ruelp, 'Come, come--tuck, tuck--it is
contrary to all respectability, man, to play at pitch and toss with the
Devil. Away with the ugly sweep!' Ha! your face lightens up! You are
smiling! See what power over the demons I possess; and now I have some
healing balm to drop upon the wounds, which your friends' adverse
verdicts have inflicted. If Ottmar thinks your introduction is
Serapiontic, I may say as much for Klingsohr, and the fiery demon
Nasias. Also the little automatic secretary strikes me as by no means
lightly to be esteemed. If Theodore objects to the way in which you
have portrayed Heinrich of Ofterdingen, at all events the suggestion of
your portrait of him is to be found in Wagenseil. If he thinks it a
fault that the singers never arrive at any actual singing from
continual preparation for the same, I must confess that I do not quite
know what he means. Perhaps he does not quite know, himself, what he
means. I should scarcely think he would have wished you to introduce
little verses of poetry, as being the masters' songs. The very fact of
your not having done so, but left their words to our imaginations,
redounds greatly to your credit in my opinion. I can never tolerate the
introducing of verses into a story. They always seem to go along in it
so lamely and limpingly, and interrupt its progress in an unnatural
sort of manner. The writer--keenly impressed with the feebleness of his
matter at some particular point--grasps at the crutch of verse. But if
he manages, in this fashion, to prop himself along for a time, this
sort of uniform, monotonous, tottery, pit-a-pat movement is very
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