The Seventy's Course in Theology, Second Year: Outline History of the Dispensations of the GospelRoberts, B. H. (Brigham Henry)
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The Seventy's Course in Theology, Second Year: Outline History of the Dispensations of the Gospel
Roberts, B. H. (Brigham Henry)
Latter Day Saint churches -- Doctrines
"The situation of William was very different. He could not, like those
who had ruled before him, pass an Act in the spring and violate it
in the summer. He had, by assenting to the Bill of Rights, solemnly
renounced the dispensing power; and he was restrained, by prudence as
well as by conscience and honour, from breaking the compact under which
he held his crown. A law might be personally offensive to him: it might
appear to him to be pernicious to his people: but, as soon as he had
passed it, it was, in his eyes, a sacred thing. He had, therefore, a
motive, which preceding kings had not, for pausing before he passed
such a law. They gave their word readily, because they had no scruple
about breaking it. He gave his word slowly, because he never failed to
keep it." (Macaulay: History of England.)
There is much danger that in some way the antecedent of a pronoun will
be left uncertain. If the antecedent is shifted, if the pronoun stands
without any antecedent, or with only a vague antecedent, or if the word
to which it refers grammatically is not the word to which it refers in
sense, ambiguity surely results. The following sentences are cases in
point:
"Either way will be difficult, for the President will want the
Secretary of War to be inferior in rank to the commanding general, as
he will be more of a personal appointee, and so he will have a better
control over the army."
_Corrected:_ "Either way will be difficult, for the President will
want the Secretary of War to be inferior in rank to the commanding
general, because then the former will be more of a personal appointee,
and he himself will so gain a better control over the army."
The first "he" refers to the Secretary of War, the second to the
President; the shift in antecedent produces complete obscurity.
No doubt Banquo was ambitious, but it did not master him as it did
Macbeth.
_Corrected:_ No doubt Banquo was ambitious, but ambition (or the
craving for advancement) did not master him as it did Macbeth.
In the original form, "it" is without an antecedent, because a pronoun
may not refer grammatically to an adjective. The reader is left to
supply the noun "ambition" from the use of the adjective "ambitious."
We went to the Capitol determined to vote against him, but got there
too late for our votes to count, which seemed to our adherents a most
unwise policy.
_Corrected:_ We went to the Capital determined to vote against
him, though this determination seemed to our adherents a most unwise
policy, but we got there too late for our votes to count.
"Which" is here ambiguous, because its antecedent is vague. Speaking
strictly, it has no antecedent, for "which" may not refer grammatically
to a phrase or a clause, but, like all pronouns, must have one word
as its antecedent. Disregarding, however, the grammatical fault, we
may still condemn the sentence, because "which" may mean either the
determination to cast a negative vote or the carelessness of coming
late.
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