The Seventy's Course in Theology, Second Year: Outline History of the Dispensations of the GospelRoberts, B. H. (Brigham Henry)
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The Seventy's Course in Theology, Second Year: Outline History of the Dispensations of the Gospel
Roberts, B. H. (Brigham Henry)
Latter Day Saint churches -- Doctrines
Perhaps one of the most forceful writers of English wras Lord Macaulay;
remembered chiefly by his History of England, though his essays and
speeches in Parliament are well nigh of equal literary value. The one
quality of his literary style which stands out more prominently than
any other is the quality of clearness: "What he saw at all he saw
distinctly; what he believed he believed with his whole strength; he
wrote on subjects with which he had long been familiar; and he made
lucidity his primary object in composition. For him, in short, there
was no difficulty in securing clearness, except that which is inherent
in the nature of language. This difficulty he overcame with unusual
success, as all his critics admit." (Hill's Rhetoric, p. 83.)
One of the means by which Macaulay secured that clearness which
distinguishes all his writings is noted by a later historian. "I
learned from Macaulay," says Mr. Freeman, 'never to be afraid of using
the same word or name over and over again, if by that means anything
could be added to clearness or force. Macaulay never goes on, like some
writers, talking about 'the former' and 'the latter;' 'he,' 'she,'
'it,' 'they' through clause after clause, while his reader has to look
back to see which of several persons it is that is so darkly referred
to. From the point of view of clearness, it is always better to repeat
a noun than to substitute for it a pronoun which fails to suggest that
noun unmistakeably and at once. No fault is, however, more common than
the use of an obscure or equivocal pronoun.
_Examples:_ "I must go and help Alice with the heifer; she is not
very quiet yet, and I see her going out with her pail."
_Corrected:_ "I must go and help Alice with the heifer; the heifer
is not very quiet yet, and I see Alice going out with her pail."
_Example:_ "Steele's father, who is said to have been a lawyer,
died before he had reached his sixth year."
_Corrected:_ "Steele's father, who is said to have been a lawyer,
died before his son had reached his sixth year."
_Example:_ "There was also a number of cousins, who were about the
same age, and were always laughing, though it was never quite clear
what it was about."
_Corrected:_ * * * * "though it was never quite clear what their
laughing was about."
_Example:_ "Rasselas was the fourth son of the mighty emperor in
whose dominions the Fathers of Waters begins his course; whose bounty
pours down the streams of plenty, and scatters over half the world the
harvests of Egypt."
_Corrected:_ * * * "the rivers bounty pours down, etc." (Hill's
Rhetoric, p. 84-5.)
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