The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 1, December, 1835Various
General
The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 1, December, 1835
Various
American literature -- 19th century -- Periodicals
novel, possess none of the same traits, and are not, in point of fact,
identical. Sterling is a mere mountebank, without even the merit of
being an original one: and his death-bed repentance is too ludicrously
ill-managed, and altogether too manifestly out of place, to be
mentioned any farther. Squire Schlachtenschlager, the Magistrate, is
the best personification of a little brief authority in the person of
a Dutchman, which it has ever been our good fortune to encounter.
In regard to that purely mechanical portion of Dr. Bird's novel, which
it would now be fashionable to denominate its _style_, we have very
few observations to make. In general it is faultless. Occasionally we
meet with a sentence ill-constructed--an inartificial adaptation of
the end to the beginning of a paragraph--a circumlocutory mode of
saying what might have been better said, if said with brevity--now and
then with a pleonasm, as for example. "And if he wore a mask in his
commerce with men, it was like that _iron_ one of the Bastile, which
when put on, was put on for life, and was at the same time _of
iron_,"--not unfrequently with a bull proper, videlicet. "As he spoke
there came into the den, eight men attired like the two first _who
were included in the number_." But we repeat that upon the whole the
style of the novel--if that may be called its style, which style is
not--is at least _equal_ to that of any American writer whatsoever.
In the style _properly_ so called--that is to say in the prevailing
tone and manner which give character and individuality to the book, we
cannot bring ourselves to think that Dr. Bird has been equally
fortunate. His subject appears always ready to fly away from him. He
dallies with it continually--hovers incessantly round {46} it, and
about it--and not until driven to exertion by the necessity of
bringing his volumes to a close, does he finally grasp it with any
appearance of energy or good will. The Hawks of Hawk-Hollow is
composed with great inequality of manner--at times forcible and
manly--at times sinking into the merest childishness and imbecility.
Some portions of the book, we surmise, were either not written by Dr.
Bird, or were written by him in moments of the most utter mental
exhaustion. On the other hand, the reader will not be disappointed, if
he looks to find in the novel many--very many well sustained passages
of great eloquence and beauty. We open the book at random, and one
presents itself immediately to our notice. If Dr. Bird has a general
manner at all--a question which we confess ourselves unable to
decide--the passage which we are about to quote is a very fair,
although perhaps rather too favorable specimen of that manner.
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