The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 2, January, 1836Various
General
The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 2, January, 1836
Various
American literature -- 19th century -- Periodicals
On Susquehannah's banks, fair _Wy_oming!
We will conclude our remarks upon Zinzendorff with a passage of
surpassing beauty, energy, and poetic power. Why cannot Mrs. Sigourney
write always thus?
------Not a breath
Disturbed the tide of eloquence. So fixed
Were that rude auditory, it would seem
Almost as if a nation had become
_Bronzed into statues_. Now and then a sigh,
The unbidden messenger of thought profound,
Parted the lip; or some barbarian brow
Contracted closer in a haughty frown,
As scowled the cynic, 'mid his idol fanes,
When on Mars-Hill the inspired Apostle preached
Jesus of Nazareth.
These lines are glowing all over with the true radiance of poetry. The
image in italics is perfect. Of the versification, it is not too much
to say that it reminds us of Miltonic power. The slight roughness in
the line commencing "When on Mars-Hill," and the discord introduced at
the word "inspired," evince an ear attuned to the _delicacies_ of
melody, and form an appropriate introduction to the sonorous and
emphatic closing--Jesus of Nazareth.
Of the minor poems in the volume before us, we must be pardoned for
speaking in a cursory manner. Of course they include many degrees of
excellence. Their beauties and their faults are, generally, the
beauties and the faults of Zinzendorff. We will particularize a few of
each.
On page 67, in a poem entitled Female Education, occur the following
lines:
----Break Oblivion's sleep,
And toil with florist's art
To plant the scenes of virtue deep
In childhood's fruitful heart!
To thee the babe is given,
Fair from its glorious Sire;
Go--nurse it for the King of Heaven,
And _He_ will _pay the hire_.
The conclusion of this is _bathetic_ to a degree bordering upon the
grotesque.
At page 160 is an error in metre--of course an oversight. We point it
out merely because, did we write ourselves, we should like to be
treated in a similar manner. For 'centred' we should probably read
'concentred.'
The wealth of every age
_Thou hast centered here_,
The ancient tome, the classic page,
The wit, the poet, and the sage,
All at thy nod appear.
At page 233, line 10, the expression "Thou _wert_ their friend,"
although many precedents may be found to justify it--is nevertheless
_not English_. The same error occurs frequently in the volume.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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