The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 2, January, 1836Various
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The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 2, January, 1836
Various
American literature -- 19th century -- Periodicals
Many but not all of the poems in Mrs. Ellet's volume, likewise, have
been printed before--appearing, within the last two years, in
different periodicals. The whole number of pieces now published is
fifty-seven. Of these thirty-nine are original. The rest are
translations from the French of Alphonse de Lamartine and
Beranger--from the Spanish of Quevedo and Yriarte--from the Italian of
Ugo Foscolo, Alfieri, Fulvio Testi, Pindemonte, and Saverio
Bettinelli,--and from the German of Schiller. As evidences of the
lady's acquaintance with the modern languages, these translations are
very creditable to her. Where we have had opportunities of testing the
fidelity of her versions by reference to the originals, we have always
found reason to be satisfied with her performances. A too scrupulous
adherence to the text is certainly not one of her faults--nor can we
yet justly call her, in regard to the spirit of her authors, a
latitudinarian. We wish, however, to say that, in fully developing the
meaning of her originals, she has too frequently neglected their
_poetical characters_. Let us refer to the lady's translation of the
_Swallows_. We have no hesitation in saying, that not the slightest
conception of Pierre Jean de Beranger, can be obtained by the perusal
of the lines at page 112, of the volume now before us.
Bring me, I pray--an exile sad--
Some token of that valley bright,
Where in my sheltered childhood glad,
The future was a dream of light.
Beside the gentle stream, where swell
Its waves beneath the lilac tree,
Ye saw the cot I love so well--
And speak ye of that home to me?
We have no fault to find with these verses in themselves--as specimens
of the _manner_ of the French _chansonnier_, we have no patience with
them. What we have quoted, is the second stanza of the song. Our
remarks, here, with some little modification, would apply to the
_Sepulchres_ of Foscolo, especially to the passage commencing
Yes--Pindemonte!
The aspiring soul is fired to lofty deeds
By great men's monuments, &c.
They would apply, also, with somewhat less force, to Lamartine's _Loss
of the Anio_, in the original of which by the way, we cannot perceive
the lines answering to Mrs. E's verses
All that obscures thy sovereign majesty
Degrades our glory in degrading thee.
Quevedo's Sonnet _Rome in Ruins_, we happen to have by us at this
moment. The translation in this instance is faultless, and combines,
happily, a close approximation to the meaning of the original, with
its quaint air and pompous rhythm. The Sonnet itself is a plagiarism
entire, from Girolamo Preti. The opening lines of Quevedo,
Pilgrim! in vain thou seekest in Rome for Rome!
Alas! the Queen of nations is no more!
Dust are her towers, that proudly frowned of yore,
And her stern hills themselves have built their tomb,
are little else than the
Roma in Roma non è
In se stessa cadeo morta e sepolta, &c.
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