The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 9, August, 1836Various
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The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 9, August, 1836
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In him (Sir Walter) these _mannerisms_, until the frequency of their
repetition entitled them to such appellation, being well managed and
not over-done, were commendable. They added great force and precision
to the development of his stories. They should now be avoided—as a
little too much of a good thing. And to a man of genius the world of
invention is _never_ shut. There is always something new under the
sun—a fact susceptible of positive demonstration, in spite of a
thousand dogmas to the contrary. The mannerisms we particularly allude
to in Mr. French, are involved in what he so frequently calls the
“_bringing up_” of his narrative. Fixing in his mind, every now and
then, some particular epoch of his tale, he deems it of essential
importance (when it is by no means so) that the action of his various
characters should be “brought up,” with entire regularity, to this
epoch. The attention is no sooner engaged in one train of adventure,
than a chapter closes with some such sentence as the following.
“_Leaving_ him to prosecute his journey, and the hunters with a
perfect knowledge of the route he had taken, we return to the camp of
the Prophet,” see chapter 21—or with “_Leaving_ the hunters to hover
about the temporary camp of the Indians, we must bring _forward other
parts of our story_,” see chapter 3—or with “Thus amusing themselves,
they continued their journey, to perform which we must leave them,
while we _bring forward other parts of our story_,” see chapter 8—or
“And now having _brought up_ the history of the Prophet to the period
of which we are writing we will proceed with our narrative,” see
chapter 14—or “_Leaving_ Rolfe to attend to his profession, and
Earthquake to discharge the duties of the office which had just been
conferred on him, let us _proceed with other parts of our story_,” see
chapter 15. Many of the chapters commence in a similar strain, and
even in the middle of some of them the same interruptions occur. And
this adjustment of the date is so frequently repeated that Mr.
French's readers are kept in a constant state of chronological
hornpipe.
There are some _inadvertences_ to which the author's attention should
be called. When Rolfe, and his companion Earthquake, are in the woods
on the banks of the Ohio, at the time of the murder of Mr. Foreman's
family, they are represented (see page 32, vol. i,) as hearing a
sudden cry—upon which, proceeding to the river bank, they look around
and see—nothing. The boat containing the family had sunk before their
appearance and no traces remained. Yet on page 113 of the same volume,
we find the hunters giving to the Prophet a detailed account of the
massacre and burning—things of which they could know nothing
whatsoever.
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