Dramatists -- Fiction; Married people -- Fiction; Theater -- Fiction
"No; you didn't send me the Chicago papers." Maxwell did not say that
all this was wholly different from what Godolphin had written him when
he renounced the play. Yet he felt that Godolphin was honest then and
was honest now. It was another point of view; that was all.
"Ah, I thought I sent them. There was some adverse criticism of the
play as a whole, but there was only one opinion of Haxard. And you
haven't done anything with the piece yet?"
"No, nothing."
"And you think I could do Haxard? You still have faith in me?"
"As much faith as I ever had," said Maxwell; and Godolphin found nothing
ambiguous in a thing certainly susceptible of two interpretations.
"That is very good of you, Maxwell; very good." He lifted his fine head
and gazed absently a moment at the wall before him. "Well, then I will
tell you what I will do, Mr. Maxwell; I will take the play."
"You will!"
"Yes; that is if you think I can do the part."
"Why, of course!"
"And if--if there could be some changes--very slight changes--made in
the part of Salome. It needs subduing." Godolphin said this as if he had
never suggested anything of the kind before; as if the notion were newly
evolved from his experience.
"I will do what I can, Mr. Godolphin," Maxwell promised, while he
knitted his brows in perplexity "But I do think that the very strength
of Salome gives relief to Haxard--gives him greater importance."
"It _may_ be so, dramatically. But theatrically, it detracts from him.
Haxard must be the central figure in the eye of the audience from first
to last."
Maxwell mused for a moment of discouragement. They were always coming
back to that; very likely Godolphin was right; but Maxwell did not know
just how to subdue the character of Salome so as to make her less
interesting. "Do you think that was what gave you bad houses in
Chicago--the double interest, or the weakened interest in Haxard?"
"I think so," said Godolphin.
"Were the houses bad--comparatively?"
Godolphin took a little note-book out of his breast-pocket. "Here are my
dates. I opened the first night, the tenth of November, with Haxard, but
we papered the house thoroughly, and we made a good show to the public
and the press. There were four hundred and fifty dollars in it. The next
night there were three hundred; the next night, two eighty; Wednesday
matinee, less than two hundred. That night we put on 'Virginius,' and
played to eight hundred dollars; Thursday night, with the 'Lady of
Lyons,' we had eleven hundred; Friday night, we gave the 'Lady' to
twelve hundred; Saturday afternoon with the same piece, we took in
eleven hundred and fifty; Saturday night, with 'Ingomar,' we had
fifteen hundred dollars in the house, and a hundred people standing."
Maxwell listened with a drooping head; he was bitterly mortified. "But
it was too late then," said Godolphin, with a sigh, as he shut his hook.
"Do you mean," demanded Maxwell, "that my piece had crippled you so
that--that--"
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