Dramatists -- Fiction; Married people -- Fiction; Theater -- Fiction
"I felt it so strongly at one time that I decided to develop the
love-business into a play by itself and let the other go for some other
time. My wife and I talked it over. We even discussed it with Godolphin.
He wanted to do Atland. But we all backed out simultaneously, and went
back to the play as it stood."
"Godolphin saw he couldn't make enough of Atland," said the manager, as
if he were saying it to himself. "Well, you may be sure he feels now
that the character which most appeals to the public in the play is
Salome."
"He felt that before."
"And he was right. Now, I will tell you what you have got to do. You
have either got to separate the love-business from the rest of the play
and develop it into a comedy by itself--"
"That would mean a great deal of work, and I am rather sick of the whole
thing."
"Or," the manager went on without minding Maxwell, "you have got to cut
the part of Salome, and subordinate it entirely to Haxard"--Maxwell made
a movement of impatience and refusal, and the manager finished--"or else
you have got to treat it frankly as the leading part in the piece, and
get it into the hands of some leading actress."
"Do you mean," the author asked, "that you--or any manager--would take
it if that were done?"
Grayson looked a little unhappy. "No, that isn't what I mean, exactly. I
mean that as it stands, no manager would risk it, and that as soon as an
actor had read it, he would see, as Godolphin must have seen from the
start, that Haxard was a subordinate part. What you want to do is to get
it in the hands of some woman who wants to star, and would take the road
with it." The manager expatiated at some length on the point, and then
he stopped, and sat silent, as if he had done with the subject.
Maxwell perceived that the time had come for him to get up and go away.
"I'm greatly obliged to you for all your kindness, Mr. Grayson, and I
won't abuse your patience any further. You've been awfully good to me,
and--" He faltered, in a dejection which he could not control. Against
all reason, he had hoped that the manager would have taken his piece
just as it stood, and apparently he would not have taken it in any
event.
"You mustn't speak of that," said the manager. "I wish you would let me
see anything else you do. There's a great deal that's good in this
piece, and I believe that a woman who would make it her battle-horse
could make it go."
Maxwell asked, with melancholy scorn, "But you don't happen to know any
leading lady who is looking round for a battle-horse?"
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