But while I was planning my book, my thoughts were frequently on more
personal subjects. And, having completed the outline, I could not
forget a certain invitation made me by the most fascinating woman in
Atlantis, but wasted no time about seeking her advice and approval.
Late one afternoon, when I knew that her tutoring would be over for
the day, I paid my second visit to her home. I went just a little
hesitatingly, I remember, yet not without some justifiable hope, for
our interview was to begin most auspiciously. It was Aelios herself
that came to the door in response to my knock; and it was Aelios that
escorted me into the house, with cordial greetings and delighted smiles
that reaffirmed my impression of her unrivaled merits.
“Well, my friend, I thought you would be coming,” said she, simply, as
we took seats side by side on the seaweed sofa we had occupied on my
first visit.
“But what made you think that?” I questioned.
“Why, didn’t you say you would come?” she returned, in unfeigned
surprise. “You’re undertaking a difficult task, you know--to write a
book in a strange language. Isn’t it only natural to want advice?”
“It is, indeed,” I confessed, and should have liked to add, “when I can
have such a charming adviser.”
“I suppose you’ve been working hard,” she continued, evidently unaware
of what was in my thoughts. “And, of course, you’ve brought something
with you to show me.”
“Yes, I have brought something,” I admitted; and, there being no
choice, I forthwith unfolded the paper that contained my plans for the
history.
For several minutes she gazed at it intently, her features furrowed
with thought, while eagerly I awaited her verdict.
“This is going to be very interesting,” she at length decided. “As far
as I can see, you’ve covered most of the important points. You will
find it easier than I thought to write in our language--your beginning
is most promising. Of course, you do make some errors of style....” And
she proceeded to point out my mistakes, in such a manner that I felt
certain never to repeat them.
For possibly an hour--or two--we discussed my outline, though all the
while I was conscious that there was something in Atlantis far more
interesting to me than my book.
I was still aware of that fact, when, at last, feeling that it was
growing late, I arose reluctantly to leave. As she took my hand, Aelios
flashed upon me her most genial smile, and requested, “Come again,
my friend. Perhaps I’ll be able to help you some more. Our doors are
always open, you know.”
“Well, if it wouldn’t be asking too much of you,” I started to reply,
fumbling for words, while the blood rushed all at once to my head.
“It will be a pleasure. And besides,”--here she hesitated momentarily,
and her fingers absently toyed with the folds of her gown--“besides, if
I help you with your book, I will also be helping the State.”
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