Applying these considerations to Mr. Longfellow's choice of words in his
translation of Dante, we see at once the unsoundness of the principle
that Italian words should be rendered by their Romanic equivalents
in English. Words that are etymologically identical with those in the
original are often, for that very reason, the worst words that could be
used. They are harsh and foreign to the English ear, however homelike
and musical they may be to the ear of an Italian. Their connotations are
unlike in the two languages; and the translation which is made literally
exact by using them is at the same time made actually inaccurate, or at
least inadequate. Dole and dolent are doubtless the exact counterparts
of dolore and dolente, so far as mere etymology can go. But when we
consider the effect that is to be produced upon the mind of the reader,
wretchedness and despairing are fat better equivalents. The former may
compel our intellectual assent, but the latter awaken our emotional
sympathy.
Doubtless by long familiarity with the Romanic languages, the scholar
becomes to a great degree emancipated from the conditions imposed upon
him by the peculiar composition of his native English. The concrete
significance of the Romanic words becomes apparent to him, and they
acquire energy and vitality. The expression dolent may thus satisfy the
student familiar with Italian, because it calls up in his mind, through
the medium of its equivalent dolente, the same associations which the
latter calls up in the mind of the Italian himself. [41] But this power
of appreciating thoroughly the beauties of a foreign tongue is in the
last degree an acquired taste,--as much so as the taste for olives and
kirschenwasser to the carnal palate. It is only by long and profound
study that we can thus temporarily vest ourselves, so to speak, with
a French or Italian consciousness in exchange for our English one. The
literary epicure may keenly relish such epithets as dolent; but the
common English reader, who loves plain fare, can hardly fail to be
startled by it. To him it savours of the grotesque; and if there is any
one thing especially to be avoided in the interpretation of Dante, it is
grotesqueness.
[41] A consummate Italian scholar, the delicacy of whose taste is
questioned by no one, and whose knowledge of Dante's diction is probably
not inferior to Mr. Longfellow's, has told me that he regards the
expression as a noble and effective one, full of dignity and solemnity.
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