The works of John Dryden, now first collected in eighteen volumes. Volume 12Dryden, John
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The works of John Dryden, now first collected in eighteen volumes. Volume 12
Dryden, John
English literature
as the Earl of Roscommon has excellently rendered it. Too faithfully
is, indeed, pedantically: it is a faith like that which proceeds from
superstition, blind and zealous. Take it in the expression of Sir John
Denham to Sir Richard Fanshaw, on his version of the Pastor Fido:
That servile path thou nobly dost decline,
Of tracing word by word, and line by line:
A new and nobler way thou dost pursue,
To make translations and translators too:
They but preserve the ashes, thou the flame,
True to his sense, but truer to his fame.
It is almost impossible to translate verbally, and well, at the
same time; for the Latin (a most severe and compendious language)
often expresses that in one word, which either the barbarity, or the
narrowness, of modern tongues cannot supply in more. It is frequent,
also, that the conceit is couched in some expression, which will be
lost in English:
_Atque iidem venti vela fidemque ferent_.
What poet of our nation is so happy as to express this thought
literally in English, and to strike wit, or almost sense, out of it?
In short, the verbal copier is encumbered with so many difficulties
at once, that he can never disentangle himself from all. He is to
consider, at the same time, the thought of his author, and his words,
and to find out the counterpart to each in another language; and,
besides this, he is to confine himself to the compass of numbers, and
the slavery of rhyme. It is much like dancing on ropes with fettered
legs: a man may shun a fall by using caution; but the gracefulness of
motion is not to be expected: and when we have said the best of it, it
is but a foolish task; for no sober man would put himself into a danger
for the applause of escaping without breaking his neck. We see Ben
Jonson could not avoid obscurity in his literal translation of Horace,
attempted in the same compass of lines: nay, Horace himself could
scarce have done it to a Greek poet:
_Brevis esse laboro, obscurus fio_:
either perspicuity or gracefulness will frequently be wanting. Horace
has indeed avoided both these rocks in his translation of the three
first lines of Homer's Odyssey, which he has contracted into two:
_Dic mihi, musa virum, captæ post tempora Trojæ,
Que mores hominum multorum vidit, et urbes_.
Muse, speak the man, who, since the siege of Troy,
So many towns, such change of manners saw.
ROSCOMMON.
But then the sufferings of Ulysses, which are a considerable part of
that sentence, are omitted:
Ὃς μάλα πολλὰ πλὰγχθη.
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