The Works of Lord Byron, Vol. 7. PoetryByron, George Gordon Byron, Baron
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The Works of Lord Byron, Vol. 7. Poetry
Byron, George Gordon Byron, Baron
Poetry
1049 _Thus much I've dared to do; how far my lay_.
Thus much I've dared: if my incondite lay. 1067
_Note_ (3).--THE ANNOTATED COPIES OF THE FOURTH EDITION OF 1811.
Two annotated copies of the genuine Fourth Edition of _English Bards,
etc._ [1811], with MS. corrections in Byron's handwriting, are
extant--one in Mr. Murray's possession, and a second in the Forster
Library at the South Kensington Museum. The former, which contains the
marginal comments marked "B. 1816," has been assumed to have been
prepared as a press copy for the Fifth Edition; but, as the following
collation reveals, the latter, which belonged to Leigh Hunt, represents
a fuller and later, though not a final revision. The half-title bears
the inscription, "Byron, Dec. 31^st^, 1811. N--d. A^y [_i.e._ Newstead
Abbey] B.
"_Dum relego--scripsisse pudet--quia plurima cerno--
Me quoque--qui feci--judice digna lini_--B. J^y 20, 1812."
and the verso the words, "Given me by the author on my birthday, Oct.
19, 1815. Leigh Hunt."
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P. 5. ingen(-i-)ous. [The misprint is a note of a genuine copy.]
Lines 173, 174.
(-Low may they sink to merited contempt-)
(-And scorn remunerate the mean attempt.-)
Still for stern Mammon may they toil in vain,
And sadly gaze on Gold they cannot gain.
[This emendation is not given in the Murray copy.]
Lines 257, 258.
So
(-How-) well the subject suits his noble mind!
(-"A fellow feeling makes us wond'rous kind,"-)
He brays the Laureat of the long-eared kind!
[The Murray copy, which amends line 258 as above, leaves the "How"
unerased, but the Fifth Edition prints "So."]
Lines 323-328.
And shows, (-dissolved in thine own tears-).
still whimpering through threescore years.
(-Whether in sighing-winds thou seek'st relief,-)
(-Or consolation in a yellow leaf.-)
Whether in equal strains thou vent'st thy grief
O'er falling Empires or a yellow leaf.
[The Murray copy gives no emendation. The Fifth Edition adopts the first
correction, but, for the variant in lines 327, 328, reads--
Whether thou sing'st with equal ease and grief
The fall of Empires or a yellow leaf.]
Line 336. All love thy (-strain-)
rhyme
Line 385. Fresh fish from (-Helicon-)
Hippocrene
[The Murray copy adds a note: "The Fifth Edition reads Hippocrene."]
Lines 387, 388.
(-Too much in turtle Bristol's sons delight,-)
(-Too much o'er bowls of Rack prolong the night.-)
Your turtle-feeder's verse must needs be flat,
Though Bristol bloat him with the verdant fat.
[The Murray copy does not contain this emendation, which was adopted in
the Fifth Edition.
P. 36 _n._ The Hunt copy gives in MS. the note concerning Moore--"I am
informed," etc.--which is printed in the Fifth Edition. There is no
similar annotation in the Murray copy.
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