Christian fiction; Wingfold, Thomas (Fictitious character) -- Fiction
“That's the best that can be said for it anyhow,--except indeed that the
poor ignorant sailor might, in the midst of such horrors, well make the
blunder.--By the way, in the first edition it stood as you have just
said: the line was,
“'Almost within the tips.'”
“What did he change it to?”
“He made it--
“'Within the nether tip.'”
“Why did he change it?”
“You would see that at the first glance, if you were used to riming.”
“Are you a poet, then, as well as a blacksmith and a bookbinder?”
“Too much of a poet, I hope, to imagine myself more than a whittler of
reeds!” answered Richard.
He was not sorry, however, to let Barbara know him for a poor relation
of the high family of poets. In truth, what best enabled him to
understand their work, was the humble work of the same sort he did
himself.
She did not understand what he meant by a _whittler of reeds_, but she
rightly took what he said for a humble affirmative.
“I begin to be frightened at you!” she rejoined, half meaning it. “Who
knows what else you may not be!”
“I am little enough of anything,” answered Richard, “but nothing that I
do not wish to be more of.”
A short silence followed.
“You have not told me yet why he changed that line!” resumed Barbara.
“Better wait until I can show it you in the book: then you will see at
once.”
“Please, go on then. I don't know anything about the poem yet! I don't
know why it was written!”
“You like some dreams, though they have no reason in them, don't you?”
“Yes; but then I suppose there is reason in the poem!”
“There is, indeed!” said Richard, and went on.
But presently she stopped him.
“One thing I should like to know before we go further,” she said; “--why
they all fell down except the ancient Mariner.”
“You remember that Death and the woman were casting dice?”
“Yes.”
“It is not very clear, but this is how I understand the thing:--They
diced for the crew, one by one; Death won every one till they came to
the last, the ancient Mariner himself, and the woman, a sort of live
Death, wins him. That is why she cries, 'I've won, I've won!' and
whistles thrice--though she has won only one out of two hundred. I
should think she was used to Death having more than she, else she
wouldn't have been so pleased. Perhaps she seldom got one!”
“Yes, I see all that. But things oughtn't to go by the casting of dice.
Money may, for that does not signify, but not the souls and bodies
of men. It should not be the way in a poem any more than in the open
world.--Let me think!--I have it!--They were not good men, those
sailors! They first blamed, and then justified, and then again blamed
and cruelly punished the poor mariner, who had done wrong certainly, but
was doubtless even then sorry for it. He was cruel to a bird he did not
know, and they were cruel to a man they did know! So they are taken,
and he is left--to come well out of it at last, I hope.--Yes, it's all
right! Now you can go on.”
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