To My Younger Brethren: Chapters on Pastoral Life and WorkMoule, H. C. G. (Handley Carr Glyn)
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To My Younger Brethren: Chapters on Pastoral Life and Work
Moule, H. C. G. (Handley Carr Glyn)
Pastoral theology
I address myself to write, soon after delivering to my students, in the
library adjoining my study, a lecture on Preaching. Let me call it
rather, a talk on Sermons, which is a term less grandiose and much more
true; for in fact the discourse has been a most informal series of
remarks and suggestions on topics suggested by a collection of sermons
written for me, and which I now came to give back, annotated, to their
writers. It occurs to me to offer my kind reader a written version of
some of these remarks just made _viv‚ voce_ to my friends. They happen
to touch on a variety of points which are not unimportant in themselves
and also typical of very many more.
For the purposes of the lecture, they have been divided between matters
of form and matters of substance; and I report them, or rather some of
them, in that order.
I. _Remarks on Diction, Style, etc._
(_a_) Take care to "pull the sentences together," to avoid loose and
redundant phrases and words. Why write "_grief and sorrow_," "_fatigued
and tired out_," "_attacks and assaults_"? A subtle intellect may see
distinctions here, but it is too much for me, and, I am sure, for most
plain people in church.
(_b_) Respect the Queen's English. "_The one_ who lives a Christian
life" is scarcely English; say "the man," not "the one." "_Like_ Adam
and Eve walked in Paradise"! This is a serious, though common, piece of
bad grammar. Say, "_Like Adam_, when he walked," but "_As_ Adam
_walked_."
(_c_) Remember that the genius of English eschews a large use of
_connecting words_, particularly in spoken discourse. Not often is a
sentence the better for an "_and_" at the beginning. Many a
"_therefore_" and "_because_" are well away, if you would speak with
freedom and vigour.
AVOID RHETORICAL DICTION.
(_d_) Avoid altogether such touches of expression as characterise verse,
or rhetorical prose. I find in one sermon the sentence, "_Think you_ St
Paul trembled at the prospect?" Please re-write this, and say, "_Do you
think_ St Paul was afraid?" For you certainly would not say, speaking
however gravely, to your friend, "Think you that we shall have a fine
day to-morrow?" Rhetorical phrases rarely give an impression of
practical reality.
(_e_) Do not speak in the pulpit as if you were writing notes for an
edition of the Epistles. What does the labourer (and what do many
hearers more highly educated than he) think when you say, on Rom. v. 1,
that "_weighty manuscript authority gives another reading_"? And what
does he think you mean when you talk about "_SheÙl_"? By the way, when
you quote Scripture in the pulpit, passingly, to a general
congregation, I would advise you to quote not the Revised Version, but
the Authorized, which will surely be "_the_ English Bible" for many long
days yet. Unless you have before you some special difference between the
two Versions, on which you can _stop to speak explicitly_, quote the
familiar (and inimitable) diction of 1611.
PREACH WHAT CAN BE REPORTED.
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