August Graf von Platen-Hallermünde was born in Ansbach, Bavaria, October
24, 1796, and died near Syracuse, Sicily, December 5, 1835. The son of a
noble family, Platen is, barring his _Weltschmerz_ (_world weariness_,
compare Lenau) and the fact that he spent a good part of his life in
foreign lands, the exact opposite of Heine. While Heine affects a certain
carelessness of rhyme and rhythm and diction, Platen observes a studied
elegance. His verse form is faultless as if chiselled in marble, his
rhymes the most careful and pure. His ballads have a stately majesty of
rhythm that reflects the inherent nobility of the poet. On the whole, his
stanzas are characterized by a full and sonorous ring, although effects
of delicate grace are not wanting (67). Platen is one of the greatest
masters of form in German literature and is unrivalled as a master of the
sonnet.
66. ALARICH (_Alaric_), the great leader of the Goths, having conquered
Rome, succumbed to a fever when 34 years old (410 A.D.), and was buried
by his troops near Cosenza (Cosentia) in the river Busento. Notice the
stately dignity of the long trochaic line without any marked caesural
pause. Any attempt to introduce the latter spoils the majestic ring of
the verse.
1. LISPELN, best rendered, _are lisped_, or _resound faintly_.
7. _vied with each other for places in the rows along the stream_.
67. The lily swaying to and fro in the water is perfectly pictured by the
rhythm, especially by the recurring five-syllable rhymes.
68. The peculiar effect is largely due to the preponderance of rhymes on
_a_ or _o_ which have proved an insurmountable obstacle for every
translator. Even Longfellow failed. His rhymes of light, night, change
the whole effect.
9. IN ACHT NEHMEN. _to watch_, in poetry is often construed with the
genitive.
14. Refers to the harmony of the spheres.
18. _Deceptively remote distance._
20. AUFS NEUE, _anew_.
69. PINDAR, the greatest of the Greek lyric poets, died according to
legend as here described. He is justly famous for his majestic odes, and
Platen revered him as his master.
9. SCHAUSPIEL, here _theater_.
11. It was customary in Greece for an older man to cultivate the
friendship of a youth, e.g., Socrates and Alcibiades.
12. In the Greek drama the action was interspersed with choral odes,
which were sung to the accompaniment of flutes.
LENAU
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