Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
Stinging gold swarms upon the spires.
Silver [_i.e._ a voice or tone of silver] chants the litanies
The great bells are ringing with rose--
The lewd fat bells--
And a tall wind is dragging the sea with dreams.
Nor could we allow ourselves to be stopped by the length of the poem,
since by thus limiting the number of possible discoveries to its length
we should be implying that the virtue of a poem was in its length.
Even if we had exhausted all the possibilities in a poem of thirty-one
words--the grammar, the metre and other technical aspects, the context
and the association of images--we should still have the fact that the
poem had thirty-one words, and perhaps find in it another formalism.
Can it be a coincidence that this is also the standard length of
the tanka, the dominant verse-form in Japanese poetry--thirty-one
syllables, each of word value? The Japanese influence is further
intimated by Cummings’ tendency to suggest and symbolize rather than to
express in full. In Japanese, according to the conventional arrangement
of the thirty-one word-units in lines of five, seven, five, seven,
seven, this poem would be set down like this:
stinging gold swarms upon the
spires silver chants the litanies the great
bells are ringing with rose
the lewd fat bells and a tall
wind is dragging the sea with dreams.
But stronger than the Japanese influence in modern English and American
poetry is the French, which in turn has borrowed so much from the
Japanese. Mallarmé, the father of French symbolism, turned the art of
suggestion in poetry into a science. He found the tradition of his
national poetry so exhausted by sterile laws of prosody that he had
to practise poetry as a science to avoid malpractising it as an art.
Rimbaud, with all Mallarmé’s science behind him and endowed with a
natural poetic mind as well, was able to practise poetry as an art
again. Similarly Cummings and other experimentalists--Cummings is to
be regarded rather as an inspired amateur than a scientist--may be
preparing the way for an English or American Rimbaud. As Paul Valéry,
the French critic and poet, says of Mallarmé and Rimbaud, discussing
their employment of the vehicles of sense in poetry: “What is only a
system in Mallarmé becomes a domain in Rimbaud”. So modernist poets are
developing resources by mechanical means to which a future poet will
have easy access when he turns the newly opened-up territory into a
personal poetic domain.
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