Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
Soul, self; come, poor Jackself, I do advise
You, jaded, let be; call off thoughts awhile
Elsewhere; leave comfort root-room; let joy size
At God knows when to God knows what; whose smile
’s not wrung, see you; unforeseen times rather--as skies
Betweenpie mountains--lights a lovely mile.
First of all _Jackself_. The plain reader will get no help
from the dictionary with this, he must use his wits and go over
the other uses of _Jack_ in combination: jack-screw, jackass,
jack-knife, Jack Tar, Jack Frost, Jack of all trades, boot-jack,
steeple-jack, lumber-jack, jack-towel, jack-plane, roasting-jack.
From these the central meaning of ‘jack’ becomes clear. It represents
a person or thing that is honest, patient, cheerful, hard-working,
undistinguished--but the fellow that makes things happen, that does
things that nobody else would or could do. (Tom in English usage is
the mischievous, rather destructive, impudent and often unpleasant
fellow--tomboy, tomcat, tomfoolery, tomtit, peeping Tom, etc.).
‘Jackself’, then, is this workaday self which he advises to knock
off work for awhile; to leave comfort or leisure, crowded out by
work, some space to grow in, as for flowers in a vegetable garden;
to have his pleasure and comfort whenever and however God wills it,
not, as an ordinary Jackself would, merely on Sundays (Hopkins uses
“God knows when” and “God knows what” as just the language a Jackself
would use). God’s smile cannot be forced from him, that is, happiness
cannot be postponed until one is ready for it. Joy comes as suddenly
and unexpectedly as when, walking among mountains, you come to a point
where the sky shines through a cleft between two mountains and throws
a shaft of light over a mile of ground thus unexpectedly illumined for
you. We must appreciate the accuracy of the term _Betweenpie_.
Besides being again just the sort of homely kitchen language that
the Jackself would use to describe how sky seems pressed between two
mountains (almost as a smile is pressed between lips) it is also the
neatest possible way of combining the patching effect of light--as in
the word ‘pied’ (The Pied Piper of Hamelin) or in ‘magpie’--with the
way this light is introduced between the mountains.
Of Hopkins, who carefully observed so many rules, his editor, Dr.
Robert Bridges, who postponed publication of his poems for thirty
years, thus making Hopkins even more of a modernist poet, writes:
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