Ancient rhetoric and poetic : $b Interpreted from representative worksBaldwin, Charles Sears
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Ancient rhetoric and poetic : $b Interpreted from representative works
Baldwin, Charles Sears
Classical literature -- History and criticism -- Theory, etc.; Poetics -- History -- To 1500; Rhetoric, Ancient
Now diction[60] [in its sentence-movement] is connected
either loosely and only by conjunctions, as the preludes in
the dithyrambs, or compactly, as the antistrophes of the old
poets. The former movement is the old one, as in Herodotus;
for, though once universal, it is now exceptional. By calling
it loose I mean that it has no end in itself except as its
subject-matter runs out. It is unsatisfying to the ear by its
indefiniteness, since we all wish to glimpse the end. That
[natural desire] is why [runners] lose wind and heart only at
the goal. They do not give out before because they are looking
ahead to the finish.
The loose movement, then, of diction is this; the compact, on
the other hand, is the one by periods [or definite units].
By _period_ I mean a diction having a beginning and an
end in itself and a length to be grasped as a whole. Such
sentence-movement is both satisfying to the ear and easily
followed by the mind;[61] _satisfying_ as being the opposite
of endless and as giving the hearer the sense of always
having hold of something, because something has always been
ended by itself, whereas the unsatisfying is neither to see
ahead nor to get through; _easily followed_, as being easily
held in mind, and that because periodic diction has number,
which is the chief aid to memory. That is why verses are more
easily remembered than loose prose, because verse has number to
measure it. The period should also be completed with the sense,
not broken off....
A period[62] is either in members or simple. Composed in
members, it is such a diction as makes a rounded whole and yet
is distinct in its parts, and such as the breath will carry
easily, not by [arbitrary] division, but as a whole. A member
is one of its parts; and by simple period I mean a period of
one member. Both members and periods should be neither curt[63]
nor long. For short [members] often make the hearer stumble,
since while he is still surging ahead, if he is pulled up by
the stopping of the measure that he carries in his head as
a guide, he must stumble as in a collision. Long [members]
on the other hand make the hearer feel himself left behind,
as by walking companions making the turn beyond the usual
stretch.... Over-use of short members, since it precludes the
periodic form, drags the hearer headlong.
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