Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine, Vol. 60, No. 373, November 1846Various
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Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine, Vol. 60, No. 373, November 1846
Various
England -- Periodicals; Scotland -- Periodicals
The writing of the present day has many distinguishing excellences and
faults. The most conspicuous of the latter is, perhaps, a want of
simplicity and steadiness of style. Force--startling energy--are too
uniformly aimed at by some; others affect continual sarcasm and irony,
whatever may be the nature of the occasion. One class of writers are so
priggishly curt and epigrammatic as to throw over their lucubrations an
uniform air of small impertinence: it would be easy to point out, I
think, an incessant illustration of this "school," if one may use the
word. Others uniformly affect the trenchant and tremendous, with very
big words, and awful accumulations of them. Some seem to aim at a
picturesque ruggedness of style--defying rule, and challenging
imitation. Very many writers of all classes are so parenthetical and
involved in their sentences, that by the time that they have got to the
end of a sentence, both they and their readers have forgotten where they
set out from, and how the plague they got where they are: looking back
breathless and dismayed at a confused series of hyphens entangled among
all sorts of exceptions, reservations, and qualifications. This fault,
and a grievous one it is, is daily illustrated, and by writers, who, by
their carelessness in this matter, do themselves incalculable injustice,
rendering apparently turbid the clearest possible stream of reasoning,
marring the effect of the most beautiful and apposite illustration, and
irritating and confusing the reader. In my opinion, this fault of our
public writers is to be traced to the influence of Lord Brougham's
style. He has, and always had, a prodigious command of nervous and
apposite language, always writing or speaking with a violent _impetus_
upon him; and yet, while crashing along, his versatile and suggestive
faculties hurried him incessantly from one side to the other, hither and
thither--anticipating _this_, qualifying that, guarding against _this_,
reserving that--extruding undesirable implications and inferences, with
a sort of wild rapidity and energy--adopting ever-varying fanciful
equivalent expressions--crowding, in fact, a dozen considerable
sentences into one turbid monster. Yet it must be owned, that in all
this he seldom misses his way; his original _impetus_ carries him
headlong on to the point at which he had aimed. Not so with his
imitators. They start with an imaginary equality of force, of fulness,
and variety; but forthwith rush into a strange higgle-piggledy,
helter-skelter sort of imposing wordiness, equally bewildering and
stupifying to their readers and themselves. No man can fall into this
sort of fault who is habituated to leisurely distinctness of thought: he
will conceive beforehand with deliberate purpose, and that, _cæteris
paribus_, will induce a clear, close, and energetic expression of his
thoughts, preventing misapprehension, and convincing even a strongly
prejudiced opponent. Shorten your sentences, gentlemen; take one thing
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