Seward, you may likewise give him a Knight. As bad as can be. For there
is an incredible confusion of tormented and tormentor. They howl, and
hiss, and boil in endless torture--they are suffering the Pains of
Hell--they are in Hell. "But the sweat of their great agony is wrung
out from this their Phlegethon." Where is this their Phlegethon? Why,
this their Phlegethon is--themselves! Look down--there is no other
river--but the Velino.
BULLER.
Hear Virgil--
"Moenia lata, videt, triplici circumdata muro,
Quæ rapidus flammis ambit torrentibus amnis
Tartareus Phlegethon, torquetque sonantia saxa."
No Phlegethon with torrents of fire surrounding and shaking Byron's
Hell. I do not understand it--an unaccountable blunder.
NORTH.
In next stanza, what is gained by
"How profound
The gulf! and how the giant element
From rock to rock leaps with delirious bound"?
Nothing. In the First Stanza, we had the "abyss," "the gulf," and the
agony--all and more than we have here.
SEWARD.
Check-mate.
TALBOYS.
Confound the board!--no, not the board--but Hurwitz himself could not
play in such an infernal clatter.
NORTH.
Buller has not got to the word "infernal" yet, Phillidor--but he will
by-and-by. "Crushing the Cliffs"-crushing is not the right word--it
is the wrong one--for not such is the process--visible or invisible.
"_Downward_ worn" is silly. "Fierce footsteps," to my imagination, is
tame and out of place--though it may not be to yours;--and I thunder
in the ears of the Chess-players that the first half of the next
stanza--the third--is as bad writing as is to be found in Byron.
TALBOYS.
Or in North.
NORTH.
Seward--you may give him likewise a Bishop--
"Look back:
Lo! where it comes like an Eternity!"
I do not say that is not sublime. If it is an image of
Eternity--sublime it must be--but the Poet has chosen his time badly
for inspiring us with that thought--for we look back on what he had
pictured to us as falling into hell--and then flowing diffused "only
thus to be parents of rivers that flow gushingly with many windings
through the vale"--images of Time.
"As if to sweep down all things in its track,"
is well enough for an ordinary cataract, but not for a cataract that
comes "like an Eternity."
TALBOYS.
"Charming the eye with dread--a matchless cataract,
Horribly beautiful."
SEWARD.
One game each.
TALBOYS.
Let us go to the Swiss Giantess to play out the Main.
NORTH.
In Stanza Fourth--"But _on the verge_," is very like nonsense--
TALBOYS.
Not at all.
NORTH.
The Swiss Giantess is expecting you--good-bye, my dear Talboys. Now,
Buller, I wish you, seriously and calmly, to think on this image--
"An Iris sits, amidst the infernal surge,
Like Hope upon a death-bed."
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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