British Quarterly Review, American Edition, Vol. LIV: July and October, 1871Various
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British Quarterly Review, American Edition, Vol. LIV: July and October, 1871
Various
English periodicals
With all this, and more that might be pleaded in Mr. Jowett's defence
or excuse, there are certainly very many of his renderings which show
a laxity that is neither necessary for the relief of the English
reader nor satisfactory to the accurate Greek scholar. There seem to
us even indications of haste, which, though not, perhaps, to be
wondered at, when the vastness of the whole work is considered, must
certainly be set down as a blemish in the performance of it. We may go
considerably further, and express our fears that actual errors in the
rendering are by no means very infrequent. We say this, not in a
random way, nor from a casual inspection, but after having carefully
gone over _five_ of the dialogues (_Phædo_, _Phædrus_, _Theætetus_,
_Philebus_, _Symposium_) _verbatim_ with Plato and Mr. Jowett's
translation. Some passages we have noted for critical remark, not, of
course, as exhausting all that could be said with truth, but as
examples of the kind of incompleteness, or vagueness, or faultiness of
rendering of which we have taken occasion rather seriously to
complain.
Let us take first the opening of the _Symposium_, of which the
following is a _close_ translation, made with due regard to tenses,
moods, arrangement of words, and other niceties of the original:
'_Apollodorus._ I flatter myself I am pretty well practised
in the matter you are asking about. The fact is, only the
day before yesterday I chanced to be going up to town from
my house at Phalerum, when an acquaintance of mine, who had
caught sight of me from behind, called to me from a
distance, and with a joke on my name as he called,
exclaimed, "_Ho there! you, Apollodorus, of Phalerum, wait
for me!_" So I stopped till he came up. "Why, Apollodorus!"
he said, "I was looking for you just now, as I wanted to
hear a full account about the party Agathon gave to
Socrates and Alcibiades and the rest of the company who
were present at the feast,--in a word, to learn what was
said in their speeches about _Love_. Another friend did
indeed essay to give me some account--he had heard it from
Phoenix, the son of Philippus, and he said that you also
knew--but, to confess the truth, he had nothing definite to
tell. Do _you_, therefore, give me information in full; for
none so fit as yourself to report the conversations of your
bosom-friend. But first tell me," he said, "Were you
present yourself at this party, or not?"'
We do not think that the above, though quite a literal version,
strikes on the English ear as in any way harsh. Whether the much
looser rendering of Professor Jowett has a more truly English ring, or
any other advantage, as a set-off to the evident laxity of it, we
leave as an open question for others to decide. Here it is _in
extenso_:--
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