Hebrew literature -- History and criticism; Jewish literature -- History and criticism; Jews in literature
Having tracked Baedeker to his source, and restricting ourselves to the
pages from which he quotes, it is worth comparing his version with the
original. The omissions made are so serious as to spoil the beauty of
the whole, for beautiful it assuredly is of its kind. The fault arises
from Baedeker only reading down one of the two columns. Now the lines
are alphabetical, and must be read across, not down the page. There are
other faults; for instance _palace_ in the second line is a mistake for
_house_, but the compiler may have used a slightly different version.
In the one before me there is nothing to correspond to _For our great
men who lie dead_. The rest of the lines are the same as in the book I
am using. But note how the effect suffers by the loss of the half-lines
to which I have referred. Thus Baedeker gives _For the priests who have
stumbled_, but omits the complementary phrase _For our studies which
were interrupted_. Again, Baedeker quotes _For the precious stones
which are burned_, but fails to follow it up with _For loving ones that
were separated_, a fine line which ought to have been retained in any
abbreviation, however short.
The only other passage quoted in Baedeker, “another antiphon” or
responsive chant, is the following:
_Leader_: We pray Thee, have mercy on Zion!
_Response_: Gather the children of Jerusalem.
_Leader_: Haste, haste, Redeemer of Zion!
_Response_: Speak to the heart of Jerusalem.
_Leader_: May beauty and majesty surround Zion!
_Response_: Ah! turn Thyself mercifully to Jerusalem.
_Leader_: May the kingdom soon return to Zion!
_Response_: Comfort those who mourn over Jerusalem.
_Leader_: May peace and joy abide with Zion!
_Response_: And the branch (of Jesse) spring up in Jerusalem.
Comparing this with the Hebrew original, there is no such mistake as
in the previous case. The summarizer has correctly read the lines
across the page. There are certain slips, and more than a half of the
whole (which again runs in alphabetical sequence) is left out; but the
shortening is here no loss, as the best lines have been selected.
Besides these prayers, the Karaite book includes a large number of
hymns. Among them, inappropriately enough, is the piyyut on the
offering of Isaac. In the Sephardic service this properly belongs
to the New Year; it goes to a swinging melody at Bevis Marks. True,
the scene was Moriah, the temple hill. But the Karaite book gives no
direction that the shofar is to be sounded. None the less, it finishes
this piyyut with the prayer that God will hearken to the shofar sounds
and say unto Zion: “The time of salvation has come.” Obviously, this is
a fitting prelude to the blowing of the shofar on Rosh ha-Shanah. But
it has no right where this Karaite book has transplanted it, although
the bulk of the hymn suits well enough the liturgy of the Wailing
Place.
IMBER’S SONG
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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