A too long, too technical, and too involved description is an inventory
which leaves no concrete whole upon the reader's mind; it is a mere
conglomeration of items. Take, as an instance, this description of
Dargelle's physiognomy; and be it remembered that we never know who or
what Dargelle is, how he came by his vast fortune, or anything, indeed,
about him, except that he is _un pauvre riche_, a capitalist, one
supposes, rich by inheritance. Here is the personal description of
him:--
'A fat face, sad, meditative; his cheeks fell in; they were
flabby. The forehead was a half-circle, with three deep
wrinkles, the temples inflamed. The brow was vast but
undecided, despite heavy eyebrows above violent eyes. The lips
of a wild beast; a short beard which had never grown; flat
hair, forming a little patch behind the brow and advancing
laterally to the ears. The whole a Finnish face, very pale,
with a disposition of the skin to become scaly. The nose long,
broad, very irregular, between the snub and the aquiline, the
end raised, the bridge bowed. Hardly any back to the head; the
neck, like a Celt's, running straight up to the crown. The ears
folded backward, stiff, cartilaginous,' etc., etc., etc.
This long and disagreeable description merely conveys the impression of
a monster; and it does not in any way agree with the character of
Dargelle, magnanimous, tender, generous, and sensitive; suffering
acutely from a sense of utter loneliness amidst the parasites, who trade
on his kind feelings. A man of this temperament would not have violent
eyes or wild-beast lips; and the elevation of his sentiments would
certainly have given some beauty of expression to his features.
Of Jacques Fougeraye, the hero of the work, we are given no description
whatever. On the other hand, the portraiture of the frightful occupant
of a monsters' asylum is traced in fullest and most minute detail, with
an ostentation of technical knowledge, in that passion for what is
horrible and abnormal which is characteristic of this school.
Dargelle, morally, is throughout consistent and lovable, from his first
movement of suspicion and distrust, feeling that his new favourite will
only use him and cheat him, as all the other dispensers of his charities
have done, to the last frank smile with which, though jealous of the
happiness he has himself created, he says: 'Allons donc! Je vois bien
que vous m'aimez aussi.'
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