Discourses on Satire and on Epic PoetryDryden, John
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Discourses on Satire and on Epic Poetry
Dryden, John
Epic poetry; Satire; Satire -- History and criticism
Besides this difficulty with which I have struggled and made a shift to
pass it ever, there is one remaining, which is insuperable to all
translators. We are bound to our author’s sense, though with the
latitudes already mentioned; for I think it not so sacred as that one
iota must not be added or diminished, on pain of an anathema. But slaves
we are, and labour on another man’s plantation; we dress the vineyard,
but the wine is the owner’s. If the soil be sometimes barren, then we
are sure of being scourged; if it be fruitful, and our care succeeds, we
are not thanked; for the proud reader will only say—the poor drudge has
done his duty. But this is nothing to what follows; for being obliged to
make his sense intelligible, we are forced to untune our own verses that
we may give his meaning to the reader. He who invents is master of his
thoughts and words: he can turn and vary them as he pleases, till he
renders them harmonious. But the wretched translator has no such
privilege, for being tied to the thoughts, he must make what music he can
in the expression; and for this reason it cannot always be so sweet as
that of the original. There is a beauty of sound, as Segrais has
observed, in some Latin words, which is wholly lost in any modern
language. He instances in that _mollis amaracus_, on which Venus lays
Cupid in the first Æneid. If I should translate it sweet-marjoram, as
the word signifies, the reader would think I had mistaken Virgil; for
these village-words, as I may call them, give us a mean idea of the
thing; but the sound of the Latin is so much more pleasing, by the just
mixture of the vowels with the consonants, that it raises our fancies to
conceive somewhat more noble than a common herb, and to spread roses
under him, and strew lilies over him—a bed not unworthy the grandson of
the goddess.
If I cannot copy his harmonious numbers, how shall I imitate his noble
flights, where his thoughts and words are equally sublime? _Quem_
“ . . . _quisquis studet æmulari_,
. . . _cæratis ope Dedaleâ_
_Nititur pennis_, _vitreo daturus_
_Nomina ponto_.”
What modern language or what poet can express the majestic beauty of this
one verse, amongst a thousand others?
“_Aude_, _hospes_, _contemnere opes_, _et te quoque dignum_
_Finge Deo_ . . . ”
For my part, I am lost in the admiration of it. I contemn the world when
I think on it, and myself when I translate it.
Lay by Virgil, I beseech your lordship and all my better sort of judges,
when you take up my version, and it will appear a passable beauty when
the original muse is absent; but like Spenser’s false Florimel, made of
snow, it melts and vanishes when the true one comes in sight.
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