Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
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Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
Germania omnis a Galliis, Rhætiisque, et Pannoniis, Rheno et
Danubio fluminibus; a Sarmatis Dacisque, mutuo metu aut montibus
separatur.
_De moribus Germanorum._
I am more doubtful about this other instance:
---- The fiend look’d up, and knew
His mounted scale aloft; nor more, but fled
Murm’ring, and with him fled the shades of night.
_Paradise Lost, B. 4. at the end._
I shall add some other examples where the opposition in the thought is
imitated in the words; an imitation that is distinguished by the name of
_antithesis_.
* * * * *
Speaking of Coriolanus soliciting the people to be made consul:
With a proud heart he wore his humble weeds.
_Coriolanus._
Had you rather Cæsar were living, and die all slaves; than that
Cæsar were dead, to live all free men?
_Julius Cæsar._
He hath cool’d my friends and heated mine enemies.
_Shakespear._
Why, if two gods should play some _heav’nly_ match,
And on the wager lay two _earthly_ women,
And Portia one, there must be something else
Pawn’d with the other; for the poor rude world
Hath not her fellow.
_Merchant of Venice, act 3. sc. 6._
This rule may be extended to govern the construction of sentences or
periods. A sentence or period in language ought to express one entire
thought or mental proposition; and different thoughts ought to be
separated in the expression by placing them in different sentences or
periods. It is therefore offending against neatness, to crowd into one
period entire thoughts which require more than one; for this is
conjoining in language things that are separated in reality; and
consequently rejecting that uniformity which ought to be preserved
betwixt thought and expression. Of errors against this rule take the
following examples.
* * * * *
Cæsar, describing the Suevi:
Atque in eam se consuetudinem adduxerunt, ut locis frigidissimis,
neque vestitus, præter pelles, habeant quidquam, quarum, propter
exiguitatem, magna est corporis pars operta, et laventur in
fluminibus.
_Commentaria, l. 4. prin._
Burnet, in the history of his own times, giving Lord Sunderland’s
character, says,
His own notions were always good; but he was a man of great
expence.
I have seen a woman’s face break out in heats, as she has been
talking against a great lord, whom she had never seen in her life;
and indeed never knew a party-woman that kept her beauty for a
twelvemonth.
_Spectator_, Nº 57.
Lord Bolingbroke, speaking of Strada:
I single him out among the moderns, because he had the foolish
presumption to censure Tacitus, and to write history himself: and
your Lordship will forgive this short excursion in honour of a
favourite author.
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