Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
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Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
The nobility having been seized with the general discontent,
unwarily threw themselves, _&c._ [or], The nobility who had been
seized, _&c._ unwarily threw themselves, _&c._
So much upon conjunction and disjunction in general. I proceed to apply
the rule to comparisons in particular. Where a resemblance betwixt two
objects is described, the writer ought to study a resemblance betwixt
the two members that express these objects. For it makes the
resemblance the more entire to find it extended even to the words. To
illustrate this rule, I shall give various examples of deviations from
it. I begin with the words that express the resemblance.
I have observed of late, the style of some great _ministers_ very
much to exceed that of any other _productions_.
_Letter to the Lord High Treasurer. Swift._
This, instead of studying the resemblance of words in a period that
expresses a comparison, is going out of one’s road to avoid it. Instead
of _productions_ which resemble not ministers great or small, the proper
word is _writers_ or _authors_.
If men of eminence are exposed to censure on the one hand, they are
as much liable to flattery on the other. If they receive reproaches
which are not due to them, they likewise receive praises which they
do not deserve.
_Spectator._
Here the subject plainly demands uniformity in expression instead of
variety; and therefore it is submitted whether the period would not do
better in the following manner:
If men of eminence be exposed to censure on the one hand, they are
as much exposed to flattery on the other. If they receive
reproaches which are not due, they likewise receive praises which
are not due.
I cannot but fancy, however, that this imitation, which passes so
currently with _other judgements_, must at some time or other have
stuck a little with your _Lordship_[86]. [Better thus:] I cannot
but fancy, however, that this imitation, which passes so currently
with others, must at some time or other have stuck a little with
your Lordship.
* * * * *
A glutton or mere sensualist is as ridiculous as the other two
characters.
_Shaftesbury, vol. 1. p. 129._
They wisely prefer _the generous efforts of good-will and
affection_, to the reluctant compliances _of such as_ obey by
force.
_Remarks on the history of England. Letter 5. Bolingbroke._
Titus Livius, concerning the people of Enna demanding the keys from the
Roman garrison, makes the governor say,
Quas simul tradiderimus, Carthaginiensium extemplo Enna erit,
fœdiusque hic trucidabimir, quam Murgantiæ præsidium interfectum
est.
_L. 24. § 38._
Quintus Curtius, speaking of Porus mounted on an elephant, and leading
his army to battle:
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