Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
The reason I take to be what follows. A continued sound, if not strong,
tends to lay us asleep. An interrupted sound rouses and animates by its
repeated impulses. Hence it is, that syllables collected into feet,
being pronounced with a sensible interval betwixt each, make more lively
impressions than can be made by a continued sound. A period, the members
of which are connected by copulatives, produceth an effect upon the mind
approaching to that of a continued sound: and therefore to suppress the
copulatives must animate a description. To suppress the copulatives hath
another good effect. The members of a period connected by the proper
copulatives, glide smoothly and gently along; and are a proof of
sedateness and leisure in the speaker. On the other hand, a man in the
hurry of passion, neglecting copulatives and other particles, expresses
the principal image only. Hence it is, that hurry or quick action is
best expressed without copulatives:
Veni, vidi, vici.
---- Ite:
Ferte cite flammas, date vela, impellite remos.
_Æneid._ iv. 593.
Quis globus, O Cives, caligine volvitur atra?
Ferte cite ferrum, date tela, scandite muros.
Hostis adest, eja.
_Æneid._ ix. 36.
In this view Longinus[88] justly compares copulatives in a period to
strait tying, which in a race obstructs the freedom of motion.
It follows from the same premisses, that to multiply copulatives in the
same period ought to be avoided. For if the laying aside copulatives
give force and liveliness, a redundancy of them must render the period
languid. I appeal to the following instance, though there are not more
than two copulatives.
Upon looking over the letters of my female correspondents, I find
several from women complaining of jealous husbands; and at the same
time protesting their own innocence, and desiring my advice upon
this occasion.
_Spectator_, Nº 170.
I except the case where the words are intended to express the coldness
of the speaker; for there the redundancy of copulatives is a beauty.
Dining one day at an alderman’s in the city, Peter observed him
expatiating after the manner of his brethren, in the praises of his
sirloin of beef. “Beef,” said the sage magistrate, “is the king of
meat: Beef comprehends in it the quintescence of partridge, and
quail, and venison, and pheasant, and plum-pudding, and custard.”
_Tale of Tub_, § 4.
And the author shows great taste in varying the expression in the mouth
of Peter, who is represented more animated.
“Bread,” says he, “dear brothers, is the staff of life, in which
bread is contained, _inclusivè_, the quintescence of beef, mutton,
veal, venison, partridge, plum-pudding, and custard.”
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