Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
When force and liveliness of expression are aimed at, the rule is, to
suspend the thought as much as possible, and to bring it out full and
entire at the close. This cannot be done but by inverting the natural
arrangement, and by introducing a word or member before its time. By
such inversion our curiosity is raised about what is to follow; and it
is agreeable to have our curiosity gratified at the close of the period.
Such arrangement produceth on the mind an effect similar to a stroke
exerted upon the body by the whole collected force of the agent. On the
other hand, where a period is so constructed as to admit more than one
complete close in the sense, the curiosity of the reader is exhausted at
the first close, and what follows appears languid or superfluous. His
disappointment contributes also to this appearance, when he finds, that,
contrary to his expectation, the period is not yet finished. Cicero, and
after him Quintilian, recommend the verb to the last place. This method
evidently tends to suspend the sense till the close of the period; for
without the verb the sense cannot be complete. And when the verb happens
to be the capital word, which is frequently the case, it ought at any
rate to be put last, according to another rule, above laid down. I
proceed as usual to illustrate this rule by examples. The following
period is placed in its natural order.
Were instruction an essential circumstance in epic poetry, I doubt
whether a single instance could be given of this species of
composition, in any language.
The period thus arranged admits a full close upon the word
_composition_; after which it goes on languidly, and closes without
force. This blemish will be avoided by the following arrangement.
Were instruction an essential circumstance in epic poetry, I doubt
whether, in any language, a single instance could be given of this
species of composition.
Some of our most eminent divines have made use of this Platonic
notion, as far as it regards the subsistence of our passions after
death, with great beauty and strength of reason.
_Spectator_, Nº 90.
Better thus:
Some of our most eminent divines have, with great beauty and
strength of reason, made use of this Platonic notion, _&c._
Men of the best sense have been touched, more or less, with these
groundless horrors and presages of futurity, upon surveying the
most indifferent works of nature.
_Spectator_, Nº 505.
Better:
Upon surveying the most indifferent works of nature, men of the
best sense, _&c._
She soon informed him of the place he was in, which,
notwithstanding all its horrors, appeared to him more sweet than
the bower of Mahomet, in the company of his Balsora.
_Guardian_, Nº 167.
Better:
She soon, _&c._ appeared to him, in the company of his Balsora,
more sweet, _&c._
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