Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
The Emperor was so intent on the establishment of his absolute
power in Hungary, that he exposed the Empire doubly to desolation
and ruin for the sake of it.
_Letters on history, vol. 1. let. 7. Bolingbroke._
Better:
---- that for the sake of it he exposed the Empire doubly to
desolation and ruin.
None of the rules for the composition of periods are more liable to be
abused, than those last mentioned: witness many Latin writers, among the
moderns especially, whose style, by inversions too violent, is rendered
harsh and obscure. Suspension of the thought till the close of the
period, ought never to be preferred before perspicuity. Neither ought
such suspension to be attempted in a long period; because in that case
the mind is bewildered among a profusion of words. A traveller, while he
is puzzled about the road, relishes not the finest prospects.
All the rich presents which Astyages had given him at parting,
keeping only some Median horses, in order to propagate the breed of
them in Persia, he distributed among his friends whom he left at
the court of Ecbatana.
_Travels of Cyrus, book 1._
The foregoing rules concern the arrangement of a single period. I shall
add one rule more concerning the distribution of a discourse into
different periods. A short period is lively and familiar. A long
period, requiring more attention, makes an impression grave and solemn.
In general, a writer ought to study a mixture of long and short periods,
which prevents an irksome uniformity, and entertains the mind with
variety of impressions. In particular, long periods ought to be avoided
till the reader’s attention be thoroughly engaged; and therefore a
discourse, especially of the familiar kind, ought never to be introduced
with a long period. For that reason, the commencement of a letter to a
very young lady on her marriage is faulty.
Madam, The hurry and impertinence of receiving and paying visits on
account of your marriage, being now over, you are beginning to
enter into a course of life, where you will want much advice to
divert you from falling into many errors, fopperies, and follies,
to which your sex is subject.
_Swift._
See a stronger example in the commencement of Cicero’s oration, _Pro
Archia poeta_.
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