Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
And with respect to the former, communication of thought being the
principal end of language, it is a rule, That perspicuity ought not to
be sacrificed to any other beauty whatever. If it should be doubted
whether perspicuity be a positive beauty, it cannot be doubted, that the
want of it is the greatest defect. Nothing therefore in the structure of
language ought more to be studied, than to prevent all obscurity in the
expression; for to have no meaning, is but one degree worse than to
express it so as not to be understood. Want of perspicuity from a wrong
arrangement, belongs to the next branch. I shall give a few examples
where the obscurity arises from a wrong choice of words; and as this
defect is so common in ordinary writers as to make examples from them
unnecessary, I confine myself to the most celebrated authors.
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Livy, speaking of a rout after a battle,
Multique in ruina majore quam fuga oppressi obtruncatique.
_L. 4. § 46._
Unde tibi reditum _certo subtemine_ Parcæ
Rupere.
_Horace, epod. xiii. 22._.
Qui persæpe cava testudine flevit amorem,
_Non elaboratum ad pedem_.
_Horace, epod. xiv. 11._
Me fabulosæ Vulture in Appulo,
Altricis extra limen Apuliæ,
Ludo, fatigatumque _somno_,
Fronde nova puerum palumbes
Texere.
_Horace, Carm. l. 3. ode 4._
Puræ rivus aquæ, silvaque jugerum
Paucorum, et segetis certa fides meæ,
Fulgentem imperio fertilis Africæ
Fallit sorte beatior.
_Horace, Carm. l. 3. ode 16._
Cum fas atque nefas exiguo _fine_ libidinum
Discernunt avidi.
_Horace, Carm. l. 1. ode 18._
Ac spem fronte serenat.
_Æneid iv. 477._
There is want of neatness even in an ambiguity so slight as that is
which arises from the construction merely; as where the period commences
with a member which is conceived to be in the nominative case, and which
afterward is found to be in the accusative. Example: “Some emotions more
peculiarly connected with the fine arts, I propose to handle in separate
chapters[81].” Better thus: “Some emotions more peculiarly connected
with the fine arts, are proposed to be handled in separate chapters.”
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