Graham's Magazine, Vol. XVIII, No. 4, April 1841Various
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Graham's Magazine, Vol. XVIII, No. 4, April 1841
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But we regret that our space will not allow us to cull even a few of the
good things with which the book abounds. The whole volume is exceedingly
_piquant_, and replete with that racy wit which is so peculiarly French
as to make us believe it a consequence of the _tournure_ of the language
itself. But if a Frenchman is invariably witty, he is not the less
everlastingly bombastic; and these memoirs are decidedly French. What
can we do but smile when we hear any one talk about Châteaubriand’s
_Essay upon English Poetry_, with his _Translation of Milton_! as a task
which he alone was qualified to execute!—or when we read page after
page in which Lamartine is discoursed of as “a noble child, with flaxen
locks,” “disporting upon the banks of the Seine,” “picking up Grecian
lyres dropped by the mild Chenier,” “enriching them with Christian
chords,” and “ravishing the world with new melodies!” What can we do but
laugh outright at such phrases as the “sympathetic swan-like cries,” and
the “singular lyric precocity of the crystal soul”—of such an ass as
the author of Bug-Jargal?
So far as mere translation goes, the volume now before us is, in some
respects, not very well done. Too little care has been taken in
rendering the French idioms by English equivalents; and, because a
French writer, through the impulses of his vivacity, cannot avoid
telling, in the present tense, a story of the past, it does not follow
that such a misusage of language is consonant with the graver genius of
the Saxon. Mr. Walsh is always too literal, although sufficiently
correct. He should not employ, however, even in translation, such queer
words as “to legitimate,” meaning “to legitimatize,” or “to fulmine,”
meaning “to fulminate.”
At page 211, the force of the compound “_l’homme-calembourg_” is not
conveyed by the words “_the_ punster,” even when we italicize _the_.
_The walking-pun_, perhaps, is an analogous phrase which might be more
properly employed.
There is some odd mistake at page 274, where the translator speaks of
measuring the diameter of the earth by measuring its _rays_. We presume
the word in the original is _rayons_; if so we can only translate it by
the Latin _radii_. No doubt a radius, literally, is a ray; but science
has its own terms, and _will_ employ them. We should like to see either
Mr. Walsh or Monsieur Arago (or both together) trying to measure a _ray_
of the earth.
The mechanical execution of the book is good, saving a thousand
outrageous typographical blunders, and _that_ lithograph of Thiers. We
have no doubt in the world that this gentleman (who ran away during the
three days and hid himself in the woods of Montmorency), is a somewhat
dirty, insignificant little fellow, and so be it; but we will never be
brought to believe that any individual in Christendom ever did or could
look half as saucy, or as greasy, as does “Monsieur Mirabeau-mouche” in
that picture.
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