Highways of Canadian LiteratureLogan, J. D. (John Daniel)
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Highways of Canadian Literature
Logan, J. D. (John Daniel)
Canadian literature -- History and criticism
Canadians, will you see the flag
Beneath whose folds your fathers bled,
Supplanted by the vilest rag
That ever host to rapine led?
Thou emblem of a tyrant’s sway,
Thy triple hues are dyed in gore;
Like his, thy power has passed away,
Like his, thy short-lived triumph’s o’er.
In a footnote Mrs. Moodie explains that ‘the vilest rag’ is the
tri-colored flag assumed by the rebels. The use of the phrase has, of
course, both psychological and aesthetic warrant. The thought of the
tri-colored flag, of its earlier bloody history in the French
Revolution, revolted her sense of nobility and righteousness, and, like
Homer’s, her diction and imagery sank in correspondence with the fall in
the spiritual dignity of her subject. Aesthetically viewed, she was
quite justified in sinking and rising with the emotional dignity of her
subject. She sinks in the third stanza, but rises magniloquently in the
fifth (final) stanza. Thus:—
By all the blood for Britain shed
On many a glorious battlefield,
To the free winds her standard spread,
Nor to these base insurgents yield.
With loyal bosoms beating high,
In your good cause securely trust;
‘God and Victoria’ be your cry,
And crush the traitors to the dust.
Compared with standard martial songs, such as Burns’ _Scots Wha’ Hae wi’
Wallace Bled_, or _The March of the Men of Harlech_, the first three
lines of the foregoing stanza are really excellent. The vocables are
mouth filling, the rhythm moves rapidly and carries one with it, and
though the third line might be improved by the use of the word ‘fling’
for the word ‘spread’ in the text, still ‘To the free winds her standard
spread’ increases respiration, and stimulates ideated sensations of free
movement and expanding personality. Altogether, it is a vigorous—a
‘breezy’ line. No Canadian need feel ashamed of it. And what magnificent
energy is in the last two lines of the stanza! The reader no sooner
reaches ‘God and Victoria’ than he shifts back the accent to the word
‘God,’ emphasizes it with a full burst of breath and with a change in
pitch, and then impulsively spurts out the utterance of the remaining
syllables in the same changed pitch until he attacks the word ‘cry,’
which is both oxytoned and emphasized. Thus the line becomes a veritable
battle-shout and inspiriting slogan. After this ringing, rousing,
energizing oxytone line comes the barytone cadence, ‘And crush the
traitors to the dust.’ The reader braces himself for action—takes in a
full breath, fronts his eyes, sets his jaws, and all his muscles, and
lunges forward to the fray. Both are brave lines; both are energizing,
impelling; and the whole stanza is a magnificent sample of inspiriting
martial verse. No Canadian need feel ashamed to recite it before the
admirers of Robert Burns or William Duthie.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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