Not until the middle of summer did we achieve that sureness of touch
which now enables us to recognize, intuitively, the presence of the one
scribe whose thoughts we are eager to transmit. That the story of Jap
Herron and the two short stories which preceded it are the actual
post-mortem work of Samuel L. Clemens, known to the world as Mark
Twain, we do not for one moment doubt. His individuality has been
revealed to us in ways which could leave no question in our minds. The
little, intimate touches which reveal personality are really of more
importance than the larger and more conspicuous fact that neither Mrs.
Hays nor I could have written the fiction that has come across our
transmission board. Our literary output is well known, and not even
the severest psychological skeptic could assert that it bears any
resemblance to the literary style of "Jap Herron."
Mrs. Hays has found the best market for her short stories with one of
the large religious publishing houses, and in the early days Mark Twain
seemed to fear that her subconscious mind might inadvertently color or
distort his thought, in process of transmission. We had come to the
end of our fourth session when he added this:
"There will be minor errors that you will be able to take care of. I
don't object. Only--don't try to correct my grammar. I know what I
want to say. And, dear ladies, when I say d-a-m-n, please don't write
d-a-r-n. Don't try to smooth it out. This is not a smooth story."
That Mark should fear the blue pencil, at our hands, amused us greatly.
The story bristles with profanity and is roughly picturesque in its
diction. It deals with a section of the Ozark country with which
neither of us is familiar, and in the speech of the natives there are
words that we had never heard, that are included in no dictionary but
are, it transpires, perfectly familiar to the primitive people in the
southwestern part of the state. When the revision of the story was
almost complete. Mark interrupted the dictation, one afternoon, to
remark:
"You are too tired. Forces must be strong for results. Somebody
handed you a lemon, back there. Cut out that part about the apple at
fly time. I am not carping. You have done well. The interpretation
is excellent. I was afraid of femininity. Women have their ideas, but
this is not a woman's story. Good-bye."
There was another meeting, at which the revision of "Up the Furrow to
Fortune" was completed, and then we went to work on the second story,
"A Daughter of Mars." As in the case of the first one, it began with a
partial synopsis. Vallon Leithe, an enthusiastic aeronaut, was resting
after a long flight, when a strange air-craft fell out of the sky,
lodging in the top of a great tree. The occupant of the marvelously
constructed flying machine proved to be a girl from the planet Mars.
Her name was Ulethe, and she had many thrilling adventures on our
earth. The synopsis ended with the wholly unexpected words:
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