“You’re quite right,” Florian interposed, with his airy eloquence. “The
first two acts are good—distinctly good. Will wrote them in the Tyrol.
The third’s a poor thing—mere fluff and feather: oh, what a falling off
was there! It was written in London! But who can sing aright of Arcady
in the mud of Mayfair? Who can sing of Zion by the willows of Babylon?
Will drew his first inspiration from the sparkling air of Meran; it
faded like a mist with the mists of the Channel.”
“The audience doesn’t seem to think so,” Rue put in, somewhat anxiously,
as a hearty round of applause greeted Will by the footlights. “They feel
it’s all right. They’re evidently satisfied, on the whole, with the
nature of the _dénoument_.”
“If you look at the papers to-morrow morning,” Florian answered,
carelessly, “you’ll find every candid critic disagrees with the audience
and agrees with Mrs Sartoris. But what matter for that! It’s a very good
play, with some very good tunes in it; and the actors have made it. I
really didn’t think our dear friend Will could do anything so good—till
I saw it interpreted. I call the reception, on the whole, most
promising.”
Rue felt positively annoyed that Florian should speak so condescendingly
of Will’s beautiful music. He damned it with faint praise, while Rue
herself felt for it a genuine enthusiasm. For she knew it was good,—all
except that third act,—and even there she saw touches of really fine
composition.
In a minute or two more, Will came back to them, radiant. Florian
boarded him at once. “Ten thousand congratulations, dear boy,” he cried,
affectedly. “We’re all delighted. Laurel wreaths for the victor! Bays
drape your lute. Everybody’s been saying the first two acts are a
triumphal progress, though the third, we agree, fails to sustain the
attention—flags in interest somewhat.”
Will coloured up to his eyes. Rue noted the blush; her heart sank at
sight of it. “I knew it was weak myself,” he admitted, a little
shamefacedly. “The inspiration died down. Perhaps it was natural. You
see, Maud,” he went on, turning round to his sister as to a neutral
person, and avoiding Rue’s eye, “I wrote and composed the first two acts
at Innsbruck and Meran, under the immediate influence of the Tyrolese
air and the Tyrolese music; they welled up in me in the midst of peasant
songs and cow-bells. The third act, I had to manufacture at my rooms in
Craven Street. Surroundings, of course, make a deal of difference to
this sort of thing. I was _in_ the key there, and _out_ of it in London.
Pumped-up poetry and pumped-up music are poor substitutes after all for
the spontaneous article.”
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