Lippincott's Magazine of Popular Literature and Science, Vol. 12, No. 32, November, 1873Various
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Lippincott's Magazine of Popular Literature and Science, Vol. 12, No. 32, November, 1873
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Literature, Modern -- 19th century -- Periodicals; Science -- Periodicals
If any one, on a rainy day or a lonely evening, wishes to drive away the
blue devils by the perusal of some laughter-compelling volume, we can
recommend for the purpose no better reading than the tragedy of _Hamlet_
done into French verse by the Chevalier de Chatelain, a gentleman well
known as a very successful translator of English poetry. With singular
good sense and feeling he has selected, not the play as Shakespeare
wrote it, but the stage-version thereof, as the foundation of his work.
For which Heaven be praised! for what he has done is sufficient, in all
conscience. Not that his translation is totally devoid of merit. On the
contrary, some passages are admirably rendered, and give the sense and
sound of the original in a manner really remarkable when the difference
between the two languages is considered. But there is such a calm
conviction on M. de Chatelain's part that he is doing his work
faultlessly, that, in view of the ludicrous errors, additions and
variations with which his text abounds, the effect is irresistible.
For instance, to begin at the beginning, the phrase
Looks it not like the king?
is translated
C'est le roi _tout crache_.
And in the same scene--
Or if thou hast uphoarded in thy life
Extorted treasure in the womb of earth,
For which, they say, you spirits oft walk in death,
is rendered--
Si, prevaricateur, tu volas des tresors
Par ton ordre enfouis dans le sein de la terre,
De tels fails vous font faire _ecole buissoniere_
A vous autres esprits.
In the next scene we are treated to a small specimen of M. de
Chatelain's genius as an emendator of Shakespeare. For no one can
consider this passage a translation of the text:
Venez, Dame, venez. Ce J'y consens si doux,
Si spontane de Hamlet m'enchante et m'enivre.
C'est pour moi _le charmant feuillet d'un charmant livre._
That charming page of a delightful book will, we think, be sought for in
the original in vain. Still more delicious is the interpellation into
Hamlet's first soliloquy of the following lines, referring to the
"unweeded garden":
Ces jours qu'on nous montre superbes
Sont un vilain jardin, rempli de folles herbes,
Qui donnent de l'ivraie et certes rien de plus,
Si ce n'est les engins du _cholera morbus_.
Angels and ministers of grace, defend us! When _did_ Hamlet talk about
the cholera morbus?
Passing over some minor variations, we come to the brief closing
soliloquy of the scene:
My father's spirit in arms! all is not well;
I doubt some foul play: would the night were come!
Thus Shakespeare, and thus M. de Chatelain:
Le spectre de mon pere--arme! Vraiment ca cloche!
Je flaire, je le crains, _quelqu' anguille sous roche_!
Doubtless Hamlet did "smell a rat," but this is the first intimation we
have had of his scenting an eel.
Thus Hamlet addresses the ghost:
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