And this is the tone of Homer. The grandest of human tongues marches
forward with its proudest steps: the clearest tones call forward—the most
marked of metres carries him on:—
‘Like a reappearing star,
Like a glory from afar—’
he ever heads, and will head, ‘the flock of war.’ Now blank verse is
the exact opposite of all this. Dr. Johnson laid down that it was verse
only to the eye, which was a bold dictum. But without going this length
it will be safe to say, that of all considerable metres in our language
it has the least distinct conclusion, least decisive repetition, the
least trumpet-like rhythm; and it is this of which Cowper made choice.
He had an idea that extreme literalness was an unequalled advantage,
and logically reasoned that it was easier to do this in that metre
than in any other. He did not quite hold with Mr. Cobbett that the
‘gewgaw fetters of rhyme were invented by the monks to enslave the
people;’ but as a man who had due experience of both, he was aware
that it is easier to write two lines of different endings than two
lines of the same ending, and supposed that by taking advantage of
this to preserve the exact grammatical meaning of his author, he was
indisputably approximating to a good translation. ‘Whether,’ he writes,
‘a translation of Homer may be best executed in blank verse or in rhyme
is a question in the decision of which no man finds difficulty who has
ever duly considered what translation ought to be, or who is in any
degree practically acquainted with those kinds of versification.... No
human ingenuity can be equal to the task of closing every couplet with
sounds homotonous, expressing at the same time the full sense, and only
the full sense, of the original.’ And if the true object of translation
were to save the labour and dictionaries of construing schoolboys, there
is no question but this slavish adherence to the original would be the
most likely to gain the approbation of those diminutive but sure judges.
But if the object is to convey an idea of the general tone, scope, and
artistic effect of the original, the mechanical copying of the details
is as likely to end in a good result as a careful cast from a dead man’s
features to produce a living and speaking being. On the whole, therefore,
the condemnation remains, that Homer is not dull, and Cowper is.
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