In fact, he did not get the prize. The worthy East Indian, who imagined
that, in leaving a bequest for a prize to poetry, he should be as sure
of possessing poetry for his money as of eggs, if he had chosen eggs,
or of butter, if he had chosen butter, did not estimate rightly the
nature of poetry, or the nature of the human mind. The mechanical parts
of rhythm and metre are all that a writer can be certain of producing,
or that a purchaser can be sure of obtaining; and these an industrious
person will find in any collection of the Newdegate poems, together with
a fine assortment of similes and sentiments, respectively invented and
enjoined by Shem and Japhet for and to the use of after generations. And
there is a peculiar reason why a great poet (besides his being, as a
man of genius, rather more likely than another, to find a difficulty in
the preliminary technicalities of art) should not obtain an academical
prize, to be given for excellent verses to people of about twenty-one.
It is a bad season. ‘The imagination,’ said a great poet of the very
age, ‘of a boy is healthy, and the mature imagination of a man is
healthy, but there is a space of life between, in which the soul is in a
ferment, the character undecided, the way of life uncertain, the ambition
thick-sighted.’[25] And particularly in a real poet, where the disturbing
influences of passion and fancy are most likely to be in excess, will
this unhealthy tinge be most likely to be excessive and conspicuous.
Nothing in the style of Endymion would have a chance of a prize; there
are no complete conceptions, no continuance of adequate words. What
is worse, there are no defined thoughts, or aged illustrations. The
characteristic of the whole is beauty and novelty, but it is beauty which
is not formed, and novelty which is strange and wavering. Some of these
defects are observable in the copy of verses on the ‘Horses of Lysippus,’
which Hartley Coleridge contributed to the list of unsuccessful attempts.
It does not contain so much originality as we might have expected; on
such a topic we anticipated more nonsense; a little, we are glad to say,
there is, and also that there is an utter want of those even raps, which
are the music of prize poems,—which were the right rhythm for Pope’s
elaborate sense, but are quite unfit for dreamy classics or contemplative
enthusiasm. If Hartley, like Pope, had been the son of a shopkeeper,
he would not have received the paternal encouragement, but rather a
reprimand,—‘Boy, boy, these be bad rhymes;’ and so, too, believed a
grizzled and cold examiner.
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